My Goal

This has been a song lately for me. So there ya have it.

My goal, Oh Father

Is not another aimless desire

My goal, Sweet Father

Wanting to give you all glory.

 

So open my eyes

Cause my faith to see you.

So open my ears

Your glorious truth oh let me hear.

My goal, Oh Father

Is just wanting to love you more.

Reviews

[Voice11]

so true. short and oh so very sweet. I love your work Ethan.

[Albatross]

Simple, sweet, and to the point. This kind of poetry isn't seen often enough. Life is so beautiful when it's in God's hands:) Beautiful poem, I loved it!

[R.S. Wilder]

Straight-forward and sweet. I liked it.

[P.S I Love You]

I agree with this poem. Its a very sweet poem. You did a great job.

[Ice QueenJen]

very good and I am sure he would think so too.

[*Always be Me:)*]

I love this. Very nice. This is very beautiful. :) God is wonderful!! :) Very good job. :)

[~ Otto Girl ~]

Way to have faith god is everywhere. God is the reason we are all here today. God is my everything so nice work.

[Michael X]

this is beautiful, you are talking about God, perhaps you could put a little more time and originality into the idea, this has no mark or stamp of passion.
the reason i say that is because the wording is mundane and doesn't
identify the author from any common writer, on a lighter note,
I know you haver the skill to make this something worthy to the tribute.
let me know if you revise it.

[Coyote Poetry]

We need to hold on to faith. Life can be hard. We must be kind and hopeful in a life or may lose our way. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[SamBug]

I loved this. I feel completely inspired just by reading the last two lines of loving Him more. You did a fantastic job in writing this one. One of my favorites!!!!