Drowning in a Mask

Drowning in a Mask

A Chapter by Not A Writer
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An awesome song declaring hopeless by the lack of help. How can I do it by myself?

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Hey!

I don’t know what to say.

Hey!

Do you think I’m okay?

Hey!

What do you think of me?

This life isn’t how it’s supposed to be.

 

Life masked,

Rainbow colors darkened.

Waves rollin, I’m under the sea.

Life masked,

Fiction world liven.

I’ll be out when you pull out your hand.

 

When you give a hand,

When you smile to me,

When you give a hand,

When you smile to me,

I’ll be there to stand!

 

Ohhhh (8x)

 

When you pull out your hand

When you take the time to know me!

When you pull out your hand

I will stop drowning under the sea!

Please wash my face

Come help me to see

Caze I’m broken!

Unable!

Without you.

Without you.

I’m broken

Without you.

 

Ohhhhh (3x)

Will you save me?

Will you save me?

 



© 2010 Not A Writer


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This would make a good song. Something what I would sing alone to on the radio. I'm not into songs but this one I'm really in to

Posted 14 Years Ago


Awesomeness. i'm guessing it's a song???

Posted 14 Years Ago


Aw its a great poem i loved it :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


nice writing and nice song!

Posted 14 Years Ago


good job

Posted 14 Years Ago


Nice song. Heartfelt lyricism.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Good lyric. It's easy to see the rythm here. Gj. I love it. Good message. One can not live life without help.

Posted 14 Years Ago


very nice

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love this!!!!!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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