Drowning in a Mask

An awesome song declaring hopeless by the lack of help. How can I do it by myself?

Hey!

I don’t know what to say.

Hey!

Do you think I’m okay?

Hey!

What do you think of me?

This life isn’t how it’s supposed to be.

 

Life masked,

Rainbow colors darkened.

Waves rollin, I’m under the sea.

Life masked,

Fiction world liven.

I’ll be out when you pull out your hand.

 

When you give a hand,

When you smile to me,

When you give a hand,

When you smile to me,

I’ll be there to stand!

 

Ohhhh (8x)

 

When you pull out your hand

When you take the time to know me!

When you pull out your hand

I will stop drowning under the sea!

Please wash my face

Come help me to see

Caze I’m broken!

Unable!

Without you.

Without you.

I’m broken

Without you.

 

Ohhhhh (3x)

Will you save me?

Will you save me?

 

Reviews

[Ice QueenJen]

Nice poem, or song! I thought it was very well written too.

[Voice11]

I wish there was a tune to this. I can judge songs WAY better with the tone of it's musical tune. great lyrics though, a little broken up.

[Livana Lowell]

Man often tries to do things alone and often find themselves drowning in a mask, a truth expressed so true I know. When they bow to their knees, it's a different story especially when they come to realize they can't handle certain situations on their own and give onto the care of the graceful God.

What can I say? It's a good beat, got a good rhythm. Is caze a word? Maybe it is, but great job once again. Ha ha, I can't stop reading your stuff.

[The Analog Kid]

I could hear this with an acoustic guitar!

[Monte Kristof]

I really like it! i could see myself on the guitar, just, signing something else than opera, for once, leaving the conservatory studies, and signing love...

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is amazing. I could feel the music in your words. The flow and story was very good. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

I agree. Great Song.

[Khaotic Katastrophe]

great song

[Daniel Gardner]

i like the song.

[The High Poet]

great song lyrics