Vain Persuasion

Read very carefully and see the message. I highly recommend you read this 2 or 3 times to see the whole picture. I believe this is my best writing. Please share this. (READ COLORS TOGETHER.)

The rose is blue

You know it's not true.

But let's say it were so

Truth or a lie will you know?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

There is a right;

Many are the differences in one's sight.

Will you believe the wave is coming

Or will you be seduced by a lies numbing?

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Joy Lynn B.]

Very VERY good!

[ClosingAccount]

Beautiful

[Ĺυ¢куĎυ¢ку]

Very nice :]
P.S. note by Lydia- I love Roses that r blue :D

[Livana Lowell]

I had to read it three times to understand and I love it when I have to do that, so this is a pretty write.

This is my intepretation of this poem. "The rose is blue/You know it's not true." I'm thinking about all the people that cause or commit wrong, yet are aware of such doings. And this line: "But let's say it were so/Truth or a lie will you know?" to me says that the people continue to commit wrong. And the second line throws me off rythm and throws me into confusion a little. I don't know if you were attempting inversion or what, but I got confused by it. Feel free to correct me.

The last lines convey to me that a person's path is there's to chose, the dark one or the light one, the lies or the honesty.

I love it; wonderful write.

[Nameless]

Very wise. Gotta read this a couple times to see the deeper message.

[misha]

Great job

[The Analog Kid]

The Devil is cunning. We all easily get numbe to his ways. Nice eexpression of that.

[Myk Malice]

satans lies can be quite numbing. i like it, keep up the good work.

[Katie Louise Hughes]

I had to read this a few times also, I thought it was good. Keep up the writing! :)