Vain Persuasion

Vain Persuasion

A Chapter by Not A Writer
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Read very carefully and see the message. I highly recommend you read this 2 or 3 times to see the whole picture. I believe this is my best writing. Please share this. (READ COLORS TOGETHER.)

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The rose is blue

You know it's not true.

But let's say it were so

Truth or a lie will you know?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

There is a right;

Many are the differences in one's sight.

Will you believe the wave is coming

Or will you be seduced by a lies numbing?

 



© 2010 Not A Writer


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That's a pretty interesting thought. Very nice. =) I love pieces that question the world and the people who live in it--but only when it's done skillfully and you did it with skill. Good piece. =)
KH

Posted 14 Years Ago


Brilliant piece you have here

Posted 14 Years Ago


Nicely done.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Nobody is right.

Nobody knows.

Only by experiencing this or that we can know and of course, when we listen to our heart.

Religions, science, atheism - are ideologies and this is not the truth.

Jesus is not a better man than anybody else. So many died, so many were tortured. Jesus did not write down a word. I even don't know if he were able to write. 80 years later ego-driven men decided what allegedly Jesus said. I do not believe this. It's obvious. In the name of God - whoever it is - there was a sea of blood and it never stops. In the name of science now we are - where we are. Dawkins, Hawking - this is all useless: does it save a child?

Well. Nice word play, quite impressive. What was first? the egg or the hen?

Posted 14 Years Ago


refreshingly different

Posted 14 Years Ago


Veru cleverly written work here Changing, don't change too much or too quickly. I like this skin of yours, it is producing some startlingly refreshing poetry. Your accompanying imagery is good too. Yes! The rose is a lie, but a beautiful lie.

Smiling at you

Tai

Posted 14 Years Ago


your writing makes me think which is odd i normally can figure things out

Posted 14 Years Ago


I have read things sort of like this before but for the life of me i cannot crack your code! That means you are a true writer! The whole poem overall is very nice I like it!

Posted 14 Years Ago


I really liked this. It was creative and fun to read. Good job.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I liked this poem a lot. Somewhere in the rhythm though didn't seem to flow as well in the first stanza.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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