Vain Persuasion

Read very carefully and see the message. I highly recommend you read this 2 or 3 times to see the whole picture. I believe this is my best writing. Please share this. (READ COLORS TOGETHER.)

The rose is blue

You know it's not true.

But let's say it were so

Truth or a lie will you know?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

There is a right;

Many are the differences in one's sight.

Will you believe the wave is coming

Or will you be seduced by a lies numbing?

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Clarisse Nanoit]

That's a pretty interesting thought. Very nice. =) I love pieces that question the world and the people who live in it--but only when it's done skillfully and you did it with skill. Good piece. =)
KH

[Huggy Bear]

Brilliant piece you have here

[Jean]

Nicely done.

[Gandré]

Nobody is right.

Nobody knows.

Only by experiencing this or that we can know and of course, when we listen to our heart.

Religions, science, atheism - are ideologies and this is not the truth.

Jesus is not a better man than anybody else. So many died, so many were tortured. Jesus did not write down a word. I even don't know if he were able to write. 80 years later ego-driven men decided what allegedly Jesus said. I do not believe this. It's obvious. In the name of God - whoever it is - there was a sea of blood and it never stops. In the name of science now we are - where we are. Dawkins, Hawking - this is all useless: does it save a child?

Well. Nice word play, quite impressive. What was first? the egg or the hen?

[Prateeksha Khot]

refreshingly different

[Tai Chi Italy]

Veru cleverly written work here Changing, don't change too much or too quickly. I like this skin of yours, it is producing some startlingly refreshing poetry. Your accompanying imagery is good too. Yes! The rose is a lie, but a beautiful lie.

Smiling at you

Tai

[Emily Paige]

your writing makes me think which is odd i normally can figure things out

[Voice11]

I have read things sort of like this before but for the life of me i cannot crack your code! That means you are a true writer! The whole poem overall is very nice I like it!

[SamBug]

I really liked this. It was creative and fun to read. Good job.

[Shade Teller]

I liked this poem a lot. Somewhere in the rhythm though didn't seem to flow as well in the first stanza.