Abundance in Your Eyes

There is more to life than just looking to self. Look to the needs of others.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

As I lay in my chair

Writing away I am reminded of this beautiful display:

Shall I help others today?

 

Hope given to me.

Hope now withheld.

The hope flowing through my veins, I give to thee.

 

I'm blindly staring at the sun's rays

No longer shall I sit and demand to be praised.

 

Hope is shining at the door

Pure success is greener than ever before!

Get off the couch, the world . . . do explore!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Dusk is already come; will the life of my works reach none?

I don't know but don't let me produce an ungrateful sum.

 

Let's help each other a little more

It's about time we knock at their door.

The change first starts with you

With help, there's nothing we can't do.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Night is finally here

I ponder, for will a great work be near?

God be our guide,

Let success come after the night.

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Aria]

Coolies! Luvs it!!

[Sofia N]

This is beautiful written, Great Job Hunnie :)

[Star Wolf]

This is like listening to someone's thoughts as the day slowly comes to an end.

[M.Kilani]

Great piece ... I feel like I'm reading my own thoughts ... I really liked the photos they tell a lot
well done Ethan , well done

[*Always be Me:)*]

this is a really kewl poem. it's amazing how that pictures you put in, fall into the poems you write. good job my friend keep up the good work. :)

[~ Otto Girl ~]

this is well written. i like it alot you should just keep writting it shows you like to write and you think about it before you do.

[A.Lee]

Nicely written. I love the way the poem progresses through the day.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

AMEN!!

[♥SunkissAngel♥]

Wow that was amazing.. I loved it keep up the good work...

~Sunkiss2018

[Kinsey]

Lovely and inspiring. I especially like the lines: "Hope given to me./Hope now withheld./The hope flowing through my veins, I give to thee." It reminds me that whatever grace or happiness I do receive, to give it back to God, then man. In this way, the grace is tripled.
Thank you for the review, by the way. Just in case you see this before you look it up in the dictionary, a tourniquet is "a device (as a band of rubber) that checks bleeding or blood flow by compressing blood vessels."