Abundance in Your Eyes

There is more to life than just looking to self. Look to the needs of others.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

As I lay in my chair

Writing away I am reminded of this beautiful display:

Shall I help others today?

 

Hope given to me.

Hope now withheld.

The hope flowing through my veins, I give to thee.

 

I'm blindly staring at the sun's rays

No longer shall I sit and demand to be praised.

 

Hope is shining at the door

Pure success is greener than ever before!

Get off the couch, the world . . . do explore!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Dusk is already come; will the life of my works reach none?

I don't know but don't let me produce an ungrateful sum.

 

Let's help each other a little more

It's about time we knock at their door.

The change first starts with you

With help, there's nothing we can't do.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Night is finally here

I ponder, for will a great work be near?

God be our guide,

Let success come after the night.

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[C. Rose]

This was a very creative way of sharing this poem with the music/pics. It really added to the read. Your message is beautiful and articulated well. I really appreciated this piece and agree with the message. Until we each focus on service to others in our daily lives we are just wandering flesh bumping randomly into one another.

[SamBug]

God be our guide,

Let success come after the night.

This was my favorite line. YOu did a good job.

[Voice11]

my gosh I cannot describe this piece of writing. It is as natural as nature itself and the pictures show just that, nature. The things that are so personalized in our lives show in images and in words. Your life must be beautiful in that aspect. You have successfully put fragments of your life down for people to see and feel. Great work!

[JenLyn]

Again a very nice write, I don't have much to say about anything you write because IMO they're all the good, so keep it up! :)

[Poetic Beauty]

Very inspirational write.

[The Analog Kid]

Very mature writing on this one. Beautifully written.

[Ice QueenJen]

I love this poem and will share it on facebook- there is a whole world out there, and even if we stop and say hi to someone may all it take to make their day brighter! Love this music too!

[Angelwithabeard]

way cool. i like t he ending, it says alot about life. keep writing.

[Daniel Gardner]

Well written. I love the progression of this piece.

[Tina Kline]

Very nice.