Magically Gone

A moral poem describing more than often what us humans do.

He wrapped his arms behind his back

Thinking the birds would take his burdens away,

But the problems were too highly stacked.

A world of issues is only what remains.

Author's Note

ABAB. This poem was thought of in the middle of the night. I spouted off line one and wrote the rest early in the morning.

Reviews

[deeps]

A short but well written write.
Very thought provoking

[Frantzuu]

this is short and well writen, great job :D

[ChristopherPoet]

Thought provoking piece, I like how it ends unresolved.

[Katie Louise Hughes]

I really like this, it's short and sweet with a message.. Thanks :)

[Sofia N]

This is beautiful, I love it..even though is short it says a lot in those four lines...Really good JOb :)

[The Analog Kid]

Maybe it's just me, but I don't get the third line. What is "hight stoacked?"

[Rae]

Woah...that was really good. I like it ^^

[Ice QueenJen]

very poignant poem!

[LeahMichaels♥]

I love simple short and sweet poetry and you really hit the love in my heart with this one. Keep it up I feel I truely understand the moral and meaning. It's a simple problem that will never cease.

LM

[*Always be Me:)*]

Very good. I love how you write your poems. Good job!