Magically Gone

Magically Gone

A Chapter by Not A Writer
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A moral poem describing more than often what us humans do.

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He wrapped his arms behind his back

Thinking the birds would take his burdens away,

But the problems were too highly stacked.

A world of issues is only what remains.



© 2010 Not A Writer


Author's Note

Not A Writer
ABAB. This poem was thought of in the middle of the night. I spouted off line one and wrote the rest early in the morning.

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Makes you think, I like that :-)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Poems do not have to be long and specific for it to be good. You show that here. Abstract poems are going extinct it seems to detail. But these poems change to the readers perspective. I can understand what you mean by what humans do...when the going gets too tough their mind shuts down and they let the universe deal with the problems. not really a good choice most of the time. Good write!

Posted 14 Years Ago


The poem inspires the reader to think in a variety of ways expanding his or her way of thinking.

It conveys a very true meaning that Man often tries to do everything when God is in control. The human race has so much to learn.

Anyways, I like the poem, which is wierd because I normally don't like short poems; they're often too simple, but yours leave a hint of complication in my mind.

Thanks for inviting me to read this.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Nice.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Nice but I think there is a typo I think "hight" was supposed to be "high" if not then my apologies.

Posted 14 Years Ago


nice great job.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like your short poems, you have so much meaning in little words. Thanks for the read request. Keep them coming :)

the high poet

Posted 14 Years Ago


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I really liked it, I love short poems. Lots of different meanings, too. Great work :B

Posted 14 Years Ago


You totally painted a picture in my head with your words. Good job
short and simple. Love it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Good write.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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