Self-Refuting

Self-Refuting

A Chapter by Not A Writer
"

A basic description of what religious people think of themselves and what they do.

"

Good is rejected;

Vomit easily gulped.

He thinks he's so godly.

 

 

 



© 2010 Not A Writer


Author's Note

Not A Writer
There is a difference between religous and godly. This is my first senryu ever.

My Review

Would you like to review this Chapter?
Login | Register




Reviews

Gj.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I totally understand this. It was really good!

Posted 14 Years Ago


=]

Posted 14 Years Ago


I was told by Godly man better to leave non-believer alone. Ain't good for us. I told him. If you don't share your kindness and knowledge? How will people know about God? Poem is true for some. Some Christian organization do great things. The food banks for the poor. Here in Michigan most are run by churches. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


This leaves me a little confused. Perhaps its referring to people who are religious only when it suits them.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I don't really get senryu's but I haven't tried either its good though!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


I am not sure how I feel, but I get your point- like white-washed buildings and putting on heirs of being religious. Never tried this kind of poetry, but I did try doing a haiku a few yrs. ago........ could be posted on here.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I don't like it, but that's simply my opinion.

The other two people liked it, so maybe i'm just odd lol.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Even though it's short, it's very powerful. i don't know much about senryu, but it's very good:)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Interesting, and makes you think if you are a Christian. I have yet to explore the senryu. Food for future thought.

Posted 14 Years Ago



Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

535 Views
10 Reviews
Added on April 5, 2010
Last Updated on August 23, 2010


Author

Not A Writer
Not A Writer

Kyoto, MI, Japan



About
Japanese writer Into all things anime 日本万歳. どんなに頑張っても私を見つける .. more..

Writing