Self-Refuting

A basic description of what religious people think of themselves and what they do.

Good is rejected;

Vomit easily gulped.

He thinks he's so godly.

 

 

 

Author's Note

There is a difference between religous and godly. This is my first senryu ever.

Reviews

[Nameless]

Gj.

[SamBug]

I totally understand this. It was really good!

[Kayla_May]

=]

[Coyote Poetry]

I was told by Godly man better to leave non-believer alone. Ain't good for us. I told him. If you don't share your kindness and knowledge? How will people know about God? Poem is true for some. Some Christian organization do great things. The food banks for the poor. Here in Michigan most are run by churches. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Tina Kline]

This leaves me a little confused. Perhaps its referring to people who are religious only when it suits them.

[Joy Lynn B.]

I don't really get senryu's but I haven't tried either its good though!!

[Ice QueenJen]

I am not sure how I feel, but I get your point- like white-washed buildings and putting on heirs of being religious. Never tried this kind of poetry, but I did try doing a haiku a few yrs. ago........ could be posted on here.

[Alex W]

I don't like it, but that's simply my opinion.

The other two people liked it, so maybe i'm just odd lol.

[Jordyn Lee]

Even though it's short, it's very powerful. i don't know much about senryu, but it's very good:)

[The Analog Kid]

Interesting, and makes you think if you are a Christian. I have yet to explore the senryu. Food for future thought.