Remember Me

A Chapter by Not A Writer

Though we be far and apart, remember me.

We were together

Walking and dancing on the beach.

Beauty unmatched

The sun could never reach.

We were holding hands

Songs reaching to the skies

But I am sad to say,

"Goodbye!"

Remember me!

Though the waves come crashing down.

Remember me!

Though life takes its toll.

Keep me in your memories

Cause it keeps our fire burning

Remember me!

I am lost

Thinking and crying for you.

It's so dark

Whatever shall I do?

We were so close

The waves pushed us so

And I am missing you,

Right now!

Remember me!

Though the waves come crashing down.

Remember me!

Though life takes its toll.

Keep me in your memories

Cause it keeps our fire burning

Remember me!

We'll be together in that day

We'll be together not far away,

So just wait for me

And we'll be together!

So remember me!

Remember me!

Ohh, remember me!

So we can be together.

© 2010 Not A Writer

Author's Note

This can be sung.

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I found it very tender and beautiful. I only think that you should lose the exclamation marks.

Posted 13 Years Ago

Livana Lowell

The pains and joy of awaiting love that has been pushed utterly away by the crashing waves that to me represent the bad times and that in the end togetherness or love is the true result. Memories are precious so that one's rememberance is treasured and cherished. This is my interpretation.

Beautiful once again. I think it could be stronger at points, but I recline to say any.

Posted 14 Years Ago

Emily Paige

this is so amazing every one i read in my head i think every time i read something by you this is my favorite they just keep touching me i love all that i have read so far.