Demonic Hands

Demonic hands are always on me it seems yet I have the victory through God by the faith He has given me.

 

 

 

Darkness is always near and

Demonic hands are always dragging me

To the pit of no hope.

Satan sways my emotions

And casts my feelings into

Temporary loneliness.

This feels like hell

But I have God with me.

 

 

 

You know what I am saying

You have been here before:

When all hell seems to break loose  

And no voice seems to be near

And there seems that no one cares

For you.

That is, it seems.

 

But neither you nor I

Know as God knows

Or thinks as God thinks.

When all gives way

My Savior to Him I pray:

With tears of anguish and sorrow,

Yet I sing of His power

And follow with reading of His Word.

Only than I am renewed

And the devils are trembled with this faith.

Behold, faith is the victory that overcometh the world!

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

This is what I have been going through lately. I hope you can relate. This is not a song at all it's just a poem.

Reviews

[Rachel Koepke]

full of emotion and truth, I absolutely love it, I also can relate. This reminds me that god is stronger than evil and he will save me.

[Tina Kline]

What a wonderful poem and I agree with it. It seems
like Darkness is always chasing and faith is what
helps. Faith and hope!

Great writing! I'm glad I read it!

Tina

[Anita B Jacques]

I like the honesty in your poem, well done, words from your Soul. Keep writing my friend, we need it badly.

[Voice11]

I love it! I understand completely because I have gone through this as well! it is a great writing that describes your experiances perfectly! Good job!

[deeps]

This is a very beautiful write here.
Full of inspiration and faith.

[Lizanne]

A beautiful work of what faith can see us through. You say so well what many have going in their life and do not know how to put it into words or if they do would anybody understand. You do just that on all accounts. Keep writing the world need more of the works you produce. You are a fresh breath of encouragement in a very stale world.

[emmajoy]

A beautiful poem, wonderfully illustrated and, full of immense emotion. Trust in the Lord.

[Lauren Marie]

I definately can relate, both with my own life and those around me (my neighbors have been dealing with demonic powers).
The good thing is that God is always stronger and He will be with us no matter what!
I only found one mistake: "Only than I am renewed" it should be "then."
And did you mean for the middle picture to be in the middle of the stanza? If so, that's fine. If not, I'm pointing it out just to let you know. :)
This was a great poem!
~Lauren

[Twilight]

Thankyou, Ethan. Yes, I can relate to certain aspects of this piece. Your have also presented it, most eloquently! And, what an uplifting last line:


"Behold, faith is the victory that overcometh the world!".....