Another World

A dream I had and than ka-boom here it is.

Another World

“I’m tired time to go to bed.”

I slept and now I seem as dead.

Don’t you see we are not on earth

This is a imaginary land that nothing could worth!

See the two pilots up in front.

Stay seated and watch this stunt

The stunt to go to Jupiter with this aircraft.

We must get valuable treasure, yeah, that’s our goal

We will gather everything as a whole.

Lift off came and moments later,

I saw comets and stars nothing else brighter

But the sun with a light so very bitter.

Saw the swirling planet with glee

Came closer till gravity sucked in you and me.

Arrived on the planet and went in our suit,

To get the untold treasures to show our friends too.

Snatched the treasure and put it in the back

Arrived in the aircraft, to go into the world of black.

Unexpectedly, did I see a monster so scary,

A tyrannosaurus is trying to eat you and me.

What’s this terror that arrived.

It’s coming closer and closer will we be all right?

Started the engine so we may flee

To our destination to receive fame and sweet glory.

To our loss it wont start.

The tyrannosaurs struck us and we thought,

“We would surely flow apart.”

Nothing was broken or torn in two,

All was to drive and reach to you.

Escaped the monster now and free of this misery,

Now all to do, is tell everyone about this story.

Reviews

[Revolutionary]

Very well written fantasy.I got lost between space and the prehistoric,but i found it entertaining