That Dark and Dreadful Feeling

Have you ever sensed that something just seems wrong or "off" in your life? Well, you are not alone because that "dark and dreadful feeling" affects even me in ways you could never imagine.

That dark and dreadful feeling

Seeping slowly from the recesses of my mind

Overflows the brim of my life.

 

Thinking I’d be untouched and unscathed

Like a super hero avoiding the grave-

Has not just brought calamity to me

But all sorts of evil in this brief history.

 

The wine glass oozes its dreadful contents all around

Contaminating everything till no healthy body can be found.

This, a harmless disease it did seem

Until, I saw it affected others around me.

 

That dark and dreadful feeling

Dripping one drop at a time

Will eventually be the death of me.

Reviews

[Dani The Unreviewed]

The power of this one is in the simple words used, but each and every one of them, on the right place. It gives that erie feeling... Dread. Nicely done.
100 points.