What a Girl

It's short and basically to the point. The point being I love her.

There's this girl who I just can't seem to get out of my mind

She is everything a man could ever want or hope to have

Everything about her is beautiful and it makes me wonder,

Why did she choose me, why am I lucky, why pick me?

 

 

 

 

I love you more than you know, even if it doesn't show

I miss you when I'm not near you, and I'm jealous of who is

And the feeling I get inside whenever I'm around you

I just don't want to screw up and lose you, because I love you.

 

Author's Note

This poem is split into two parts. The first part is just speaking in general and then the second part is speaking to the girl.

Reviews

[Gianna Perry]

:)

[TheOther]

Aww, pure love, so radiant and passionate. I can relate to this cause I'm in love too and I feel the same way. Sheer adoration of the beloved one. Nicely done.

[Joshua Donahue]

very cute. a girl would definitely love this. good job

[Jeff]

Very nice writing here.

[Sam Cambell]

Awwww....

[Kasey Jones]

Aw this is so sweet. There's so much feeling in it. Clever wording, too.
And I don't think you have to worry. You guys are too strong to let anything tear you down.











I hope I'm not jinxing it. O_o