Emotions

Feeling moody, decided to write about it.

Love can bloom like any flower, opening up when it's time
But love can hurt like a raging storm, lighting up the skies
Desire can flood like a tsunami wave, wiping all out of its path
Hope can bring two people together, finding each other at last
Romance can burn like a dancing flame, warming your heart and soul
Happiness can mend a broken heart, as it works to make it whole
Emotions can do all these things, yes it is all true
But ask yourself this question-
What can they do for you?

Author's Note

Emotions can make you happy or sad, decide what they can do for you! :)

Reviews

[Emrick]

Emotions can make me angry and joyous. Emotions can make me do things contrary to common sense.
Nice and wise verse Miranda.

[Roger Turgeon]

OK You kind of went free verse then rhyme. I prefer the rhyme of the last 5 lines. With a little consistency this would be great!!! ( : O )

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it s very gentle and words speak to me at the silence. i like it. emotions are important part of human life. can give us hope , can hurt us , can make us better person ,can make us whorst person. balance is very important don t get burn don t get too much cold. have great journey . i wish you all the best

[Miranda Richard]

Thank you for looking at my poem, it means a lot. I'm so glad the poem speaks to you..that's all I aim for.

[Draven]

Emotions are my favorite part of living. Being human is such a gift. The freedom to choose, and to feel the world around us with the invisible waves that are emotion.

[Miranda Richard]

Nicely put, thanks for the review :)

[Keith LaFountaine]

You've got excellent imagery here. Good work!

[Miranda Richard]

Thanks again, it's one of my favorites too!

[Rhianne Ney]

That's right, emotions do a lot for a person. It might break someone, make someone happy or let everyone feel at ease. This things are all in accordance to emotions yet without it what are we? What is our purpose without feeling a thing?
We live because we have emotions that make us alive. Greatly written poem, good job!

[Miranda Richard]

Thank you! :)

[Rhianne Ney]

welcomezz

[Jayden Ireton]

A great piece on the ying and yang of emotions. They can truly "hurt like a raging storm."

[Miranda Richard]

Sure can. Thank you :)

[WideEyedAbyss]

they can decide what i will do and where i will go in life. they will make me deciede who to trust and who to forget. they rule the life of that which i call mine

[Miranda Richard]

Nicely spoken, a little poetical actually :)

[Nick.B]

True, love may seem like the most wonderfully thing, but all good things have an end, so sooner or later we will start to hate our loved one which we once promised the moon or some cheesy poetic nonsense(damn, I'm gloomy)...anyway well done, love your poem

[Miranda Richard]

Gloomy? Cheer up Nick! And love won't end if you're with the right person or work everything out, and thank you :)

[Frieda P]

Emotions, they can lift us or be the bane of our mere existence! I really like this one Rayne, I've asked myself that very question, and the answer is drive us bobinz! Nice one!

[Miranda Richard]

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it! True, emotions can make us or break us :)