The leap (i dont know what to call it)

The leap (i dont know what to call it)

A Story by JonesDenmark
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The only reason i took the location "The psychologist hospital" Is it would make a great twist ending. If someone gets offended of it send me a message and i will delete it from the webpage.

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She was laying in her room on 5th floor. She could feel a moving object inside her. Like a bird flapping over the sky, like a fish swimming in her. But it would soon be over. Later that day she was getting picked up by a truck. This truck would mean the ending of the baby. She could feel the blood rolling in her veins and she breathed slowly as the doctor said to her. Suddenly a noise from outside broke the silence. The truck was there. It felt like the time stopped. It was now, the last opportunity to give them a answer. Let the baby go, and get her young life's freedom some more years or just send them away, and get every girls dream a lot faster than everyone of her friends. It was like god stopped the time, just so he could get her at least the few minutes she had to last forever. She could hear them open the door, and their loud voices when the shout after her. ''Wait a minute'' she couldn't do this. She couldn´t get through it, the baby. She could hear them come up the stairs. They whispered with low voices but she could still hear them on their way. They were talking about her. She could hear them exactly as they were standing right next to her. It was not the hospital people. It was someone else, maybe thieves there would make sure that no one in this house would be alive the next morning when all the expensive stuff and leave no humans alive in. She opened her window in her room and looked out in her garden. She could feel the cold wind in her hair, and on her face. The men knocked on the door again. She must do this she couldn’t wait another minute to get away from all the pain, and those two men who would hurt her, and the baby. She lean her body outside the window. The men knocked again and yelled that she should open the door right now. She could feel the wind in her hair, and body when she jumped out the window. She was dead before she get down to the ground after she let go for her life. The men leaned out and looked down on the body there were laying in the middle of the garden of the psychologist hospital. They could see her bloody body there was stretch out in some crazy positions.

© 2015 JonesDenmark


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Added on February 16, 2015
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