Sonnet 16 February 2014

Sonnet 16 February 2014

A Poem by JonathanHammond
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Iambic pentameter. Tell me if you see otherwise. Sonnet, attempted Italian Style. a b b a a b b a c d c d c d Comments are open to whatever you want to say.

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A cigarette flies blazing in the air
As coffee sits in cups the color black
One lucky butt reversed inside the pack
Broke right in half as if the fates would care
The whirl 'n' twirl of smoke subdues the stare
Of thoughts, my ashes never coming back
This time makes up for other things I lack
As orange embers give their final flare
My caffeinated high won't last for long
As living always has a price to pay
The burning filter reeks of what is wrong
About the petty reasons why I stay
Perhaps the hand of death will bring along
A cigarette to toke my final day

© 2014 JonathanHammond


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Peabody, MA



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