A bit of a cliché

A bit of a cliché

A Poem by Jonathan Dalton
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Written on 19 May 2013

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The other day,
someone close to me
pissed on my dreams
a little.

So the only thing to do,
I think,
is clean them.

© 2013 Jonathan Dalton


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hmmmmmmmmm , very short but its concise what can one do when someone hampers and degrades your dream with haughty expressions you need to move forward ,forget about them one mans critique doesn't define you :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Jonathan Dalton

11 Years Ago

Thanks for your review Peter :) Short and concise sounds good to me! I didn't need more words, hehe.

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Jonathan Dalton
Jonathan Dalton

Windsor, United Kingdom



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Writer and human being. As well as writing poetry, I've written a novel and also write occasional short stories. Being a professional writer is my only career ambition. Check out my website, Like .. more..

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