Eidolon

Shaped like a cross, you stood,
A pantomime invitation to embrace
Before God and all that is good.
Little Scarecrow Woman with a shiny face,
Your savage scarves and oblique bones,
Your lipstick, pearls, perfumed coiffure
And that smile weighed down with stones
Oh, grandmother, you cut quite the figure.
You broke my mind
Humming jaundiced lullabyes,
Rehearsing your next line.
I skipped rope on all those lies
And played dress up at your shrine.
But I am vigilant tonight,
Drawing my curtains tight
Warding off the profane
When on the wind again you ride
To etch your dust across my pane
Inciting crows to flap and fly inside.

Reviews

[Perdition]

Let them in...by all things holy and "cross-shaped" release the effing crows in! If I were to choose a line or two that broke me, and they always will do so, they would be, "Your savage scarves and oblique bones". Instantly she surpasses and becomes that human imprisoned in the corridors of what can and cannot. The rest is wonderful lipstick, ruby light, and "goat's head oil" polite when rude and rude where polite, lights up the rude, for the visuals and frames perhaps, but still without the frame who could know this woman for sure? The next," You broke my mind", it's so simple a line that puts hell in our pockets and sharp fears in our veins of what certain people can do so suddenly as certain and imprisoning us for life in their importance and experience. Now, as for the "flapping", well I had to laugh at the terror. Always stunned and a welcome embrace you've become to this little family of fools..haha!

[Joli Dy]

Crowd released to flap about inside. I just wish they'd do so in a cadence that harmonizes a bit with my heartbeat. "What's the fun in that?" I hear you ask in my head, you insistent cricket. Alas, you're right, but my grandmother's crows redefine "fun".
"Why wouldn't they", you ask? Look, if you're going to rent space in my head, up there, keep it down up there. I need some sleep.

[Joli Dy]

C r o w s, you uneditable, unforgiving comment platform from hell!

[Perdition]

Hahaha… yeah… saw that coming~

[JessyJacob]

Sacha pyar one who does she will get. But if he turns out be cheat blaming her he ruined by his own fate.

See Ern is also big fan of Marie and her kiss.

I think MARIE SHARED BED WITH BOTH.

anways its out of topic.

Thank you for sharing such good lines.

Another is omly ones who does sacha pyar for the night because they need money. Atleast they do for 100% true work. Great.

So in hindu dharm a prostitute only sleeps with many. Nowadays most of metroploitan cities hav these women and around globe who sleepz with many. Thats way Aids didnt find medication to cure and drunkard never gets treated and even with rehabitation.


Great friends f*****g their own friends.

[Joli Dy]

Well aren't you entertaining?

[JessyJacob]

Why you are getting amgry moonsong, are you glenda or marie. I am not nuts.

[JessyJacob]

Well i entertain do. I make funny pics for my husband. Funny jokes to my son. Overall i enjoy my time with my family. If you say i am entertaining, in this life i loved my schoolmate, married and divorced my x husband. And beem part of truce or plot for my God.

In this way i might be entertaining. But few people sell body fir fin pleasure and money.

[JessyJacob]

If you say i sell my jar and jug definitely i did with above mentioned. But my true love to g9d is divine, i didnt even touch him because he is not present omly we can feel him in belief.

[JessyJacob]

You cant understand this divinity fot few who neds voracious sex. How can they stay without sex. They can lie with anybody fir years and still their desire is so much. I hav seen my dad still he watches nudity and sex in phone. No wonder people need very voracious sex. For them god will never be perceived.

Hope you got my point.

[JessyJacob]

Because for divine love like racha meerabhai or rukhmini, it needs guts to face people family, and one of the only thing sacrifice. For most of tgem are very impatient they look fir shortcuts fir thiz pleasure and just lie ti get that sex.

[JessyJacob]

You are free to block me i know even you understand still you sccept neither of you.
I love my god and he is my husband.

[JessyJacob]

Dont accept and wil delete my comments. Fact is a truth evem if you read it tevers the meaning it makes same.

[Joli Dy]

No desire to block you. Feel free to paint these walls. Quite frankly, I'm awed at your ability to carry on discourse without curiosity, humility, empathy, structure or organization. It must be a gift.

[JessyJacob]

Well an emotional mind though in sex or angry never thinks. A well trained professional sex giver thinks about whatever you said above. Well i am an emotional women and i dont care when it come to give ti my God, whethrs its money or career or to become servant and clean his poop.

Hope you got my point.

[JessyJacob]

Hope i havent disturbed your bed time to get pleased by your flacccid thing.

[JessyJacob]

Well i paint my walls, i dont se without paint any of your writibgs with multiple profiles on otgers walls. Mine are little scartches to warn if someone goes off the track. Anyways i am not great ppet to write like you. And definitely glenda needs painting on het walls of writings.

If you. Throw a rock up it turns back because you are hurting someone and that calm mind of space meber znswers but guves back your stone.

[JessyJacob]

I know you are not weak in english.

[Joli Dy]

If I might... How did your roadmap lead you from my poem about a dark grandmother figure to a libelous responsorial rant about your fellow writers, sexual immorality, and the moral high ground. I'm honestly stumped. Fascinated, but alas, stumped. I do applaud your willingness to clean God's "poop", though. I'll reassess my humility jab; I didn't have all the facts, you know.

[JessyJacob]

I know you are not weak in english.

[JessyJacob]

Well great a wife does clean everything of her husband so as my god is my husband so when is not well i dies everything and to his parents who are my inlaws. I dont why you need to reaases facts. Its fun fit certain age as you grow you carry responsibility. But few who has so many savings he will enjoy flaccidity why does he care poor wife going tgrough general compartment without sleep only to make her family running. I hope you need some responsibilty. Not the fun . Few people enjoy hardships but fir you false love also looks so great. Any brothel house will show that false love eating away all your money. Fir that you need to spare time fir poor preople love.

[JessyJacob]

Do you need to ?????

[JessyJacob]

I dont undrstand why siddharth malhitgra wife still working in films and i think her habbit of sex giving still not gone. Though he gave crystal lrhenga to her in wedding.

Can you clarify..

[JessyJacob]

Well a professional women gives massage and a normal wife cleans body when he is sick. I see benefit in professional massage and in wife i see just love care and sacrifice.

[Joli Dy]

I'm taking notes. "Enjoy flaccidity" and "brothel house." I wrote about a dark grandmother and I'm trying to apply your constructive criticism. Can you please show me where I went astray because I'm not sure where to apply the advice to strengthen my writing.

[JessyJacob]

Do you agree. Even you agree you cant accept because you dont want to get into trouble. But i am saying facts it doesnt matter whether accrpt this truth.

[JessyJacob]

Well i was reading glenda writing
said, "I thought you were calling!"
I said, "Why should I?"
He said, "I'm coming over."
I responded, "I am ready."
My table stays ready.
My oils and lotions stay handy.
In minutes, he was at my door.
"Lie down when you undress."
"Is that really necessary?" he asked.
"It is," I joked, "You want it or not?"
He quickly undressed and laid on the table.
Oil from Israel is all I use. It is pure and clean.
I never squirt on the customer, I squirt in my hand.
No oil is wasted that might drip while we work.
"Mmmmmmmm, that feels and smells delicious,"
He says low and I am inspired to move further...
My hands drenched in oils, I massage his neck,
behind his ears and down...his shoulders are tight..
I spend time exerting my training, forcefully. He moans..
Applying circular movements to pressure points on the spine
And down to the glutes where much tension builds up. I rest there.
"Don't stop," he breathes low and that spurs me right on, I persist
Down his his hips, legs and ankles, even his feet massaging a toe at a time.
Here is where I turn him from front to back to work on the tops of the feet...
I travel up the shins to knees to frontal rectus femoris, a sensitive zone.
If the money is right, I have permission to access as far as I want, it's my call.
Here's where the line blurs...There is nothing wrong with touching a man..
As long as he remains calm and does not attack. This is my livelihood.
His penis is flaccid, I notice he is uncircumcised, this is a treat for me!
I am particular to the uncircumcised penis and I bathe it to remove any smegma.
Smegma is a normal substance that occurs in both male and female genitalia.
Of course, any manipulation is going to incite some erection but I work on obliviously.
I ask, "Is it okay if I touch your penis?" And he nods excitedly. I proceed.
This is actually a normal part of the relaxation process. A man's penis is loaded with extrasensory sensations.
This is not ESP. This is the ability to achieve the highest form of sensation.
I must move carefully so my movements remain professional but relaxing.
I touch the very base of his penis, almost at the thigh and start manipulation techniques toward the glans.


What do you say about this. But i am just refering to it. I dont see her as a family women.

[JessyJacob]

Only prostitutes does this kind of giving sex. No men till now havent seen fallen fir sex. Maybe initially like maryada rammanna but he became sanyasi after having enough sex with one prostitute.

I would say contrll your emotions else you become to that stage where you will be having sex as you dont like it anymore. Onlg family people just get mild sex but this glenda wrote as if she just wants f**k men. I am warning her she will be never getting any more sex though person is f*****g her that is kaami gani mokshagami. Because when you dont leave sex you wont be reaching god. Everyone man she would love to zleep with.

[JessyJacob]

Well if you talk about your sister and does she do the same kind of profesionalism let me know.. i just want to see

[JessyJacob]

Defimitely she is not z profesiomal massage maker i see. And not even any.of your family relatives.

[JessyJacob]

What happened you got busy...

[JessyJacob]

I know in rich families and families with oene or 2 kids never get angry on their children and continuously let them hav their fun tho7gh going off track. But i hav ben raised in big family. I dont mind when my parents hurt me. But you are not so. You cant bear slight anger too thats how your family raised you.

I think this is why you are getting pissed off .

[Joli Dy]

Yeah, thanks. I'm going to take that into consideration. You definitely have a point of view.

[Joli Dy]

Do I seem pissed off? I don't feel pushed off. I must have trouble expressing myself. Thank you for pointing that out. I'm going to work on it.

[Joli Dy]

"Pissed off" sorry for the typo. Aren't they annoying?

[Paul in the Buff]

I've never been with a prostitute. After reading these comments, now I feel like I'm missing out on something....

[Joli Dy]

Oh, now you've done it. You just want to steal my patron!

[JessyJacob]

Yes but all humans including god does get angry. It is one emotion god has created to shoe other person care and love to you. If you feel offended without understanding then it is something you should understand why other is getting angry.
Hope this small understanding makes life and love more fun to enjoy.

[JessyJacob]

Thank you. Great to know my talk made you feel sense in that. Anyways my angry is only slways a concern. If i am not concerned then it is just ignoring it or just no cemcern about it.

[Joli Dy]

See? That right there... Gold. Your intention all along was to help me. You're so right. I need to work on my understanding when kind people like yourself take the time to freely gift me their pearls of wisdom. Namaste.

[JessyJacob]

I always tried to made you understand but you dont listen and just blocks me anx deletes my comments.

[Joli Dy]

I think you have me confused with someone else. I delete no comments. I prefer to allow people the freedom to paint their own pictures of themselves, something you have done with great panache, I might add. It would be a poverty to this site to deprive them of your insight. I know I shall not soon forget it.

[JessyJacob]

I hav reached much deeper into love adoration with my god. Even now my body aches but his only spirit makes awake in sleep. Such is my deep connection with him god. But sometimes god also feels pain in making things better. It just needs patience. I dont know how much patiencebhsve it more yhan love ovet him. So thatz why i said i clezn his poop. It doesnt hurt me because i see it as my love to him to help.him out.

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

it reminds me a bit about Edgar Allan Poe. the gothic imagery and the morbid atmosphere evokes that sense of unease and dread. yet it also seems quite biographical, the persona feels vulnerable and trapped. prayer being the final thing we turn to when desperate, she draws the curtains tight. it was an atmospheric and eerie work. the horror-lover in me dances around to this verse.

[Joli Dy]

Thank you, Ern! You just made my day. I like to play in the dark sometimes; it's good to know I'm not the only one.