![]() Hels DonkerteA Poem by Natalie C and Gary H Collaborative Writings![]() a poem created by word association and we're guessing not many of you would use the same words.![]()
obscurity of the night shrine raven shadows in death unforgiving cruel, threatened within a surreal blood copper curfew hallowed seconds of torture hanging bordello ballroom restless, sinister vulnerable to mercury teardrops toxic screams in sunspots vanished strange infernal blaze empty mercy, a kismet sewer world of rats spew, splatter cautious, there is nothing to restrain valleys of winter covered in caster sugar white © 2008 Natalie C and Gary H Collaborative WritingsReviews
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12 Reviews Added on July 29, 2008 Author![]() Natalie C and Gary H Collaborative WritingsBoth sides of the worldAboutOur first story is now complete and we would love any comments so we can determine whether this venture has been successful as a first draft or whether we should go back to the drawing board. .. more..Writing
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