Hels Donkerte

Hels Donkerte

A Poem by Natalie C and Gary H Collaborative Writings
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a poem created by word association and we're guessing not many of you would use the same words.

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obscurity of the night shrine

raven shadows in death unforgiving

cruel, threatened

within a surreal blood copper curfew

hallowed seconds of torture

hanging bordello ballroom

restless, sinister

vulnerable to mercury teardrops

toxic screams in sunspots vanished

strange infernal blaze

empty mercy, a kismet

sewer world of rats spew, splatter

cautious, there is nothing to restrain

valleys of winter covered

in caster sugar white

© 2008 Natalie C and Gary H Collaborative Writings


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good job with the word association, very creative! i agree with blue angel, a masterpiece :D

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Ooo, very well with the word association style! See what happens when you combine a word with a word?? It ='s a masterpiece ;) Great job!

B.A.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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