Hels DonkerteA Poem by Natalie C and Gary H Collaborative Writingsa poem created by word association and we're guessing not many of you would use the same words.
obscurity of the night shrine raven shadows in death unforgiving cruel, threatened within a surreal blood copper curfew hallowed seconds of torture hanging bordello ballroom restless, sinister vulnerable to mercury teardrops toxic screams in sunspots vanished strange infernal blaze empty mercy, a kismet sewer world of rats spew, splatter cautious, there is nothing to restrain valleys of winter covered in caster sugar white © 2008 Natalie C and Gary H Collaborative WritingsReviews
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12 Reviews Added on July 29, 2008 AuthorNatalie C and Gary H Collaborative WritingsBoth sides of the worldAboutOur first story is now complete and we would love any comments so we can determine whether this venture has been successful as a first draft or whether we should go back to the drawing board. .. more..Writing
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