Touch of the BeastA Chapter by Natalie C and Gary H Collaborative WritingsCelestine longs for the feel of Djinn and seeks to find him through using whatever power she can find."17 Davenport Road, Vredeshoek - huh, the 'peaceful corner' in Africaans. I think I know that place. She seems to really want me. Not bad looking, not bad at all.....what did she say her name was now? Kaaren? Christie? No, it wasn't, Celestine....Duncan - yes, that's the one." Mark Smit drove through the streets of Cape Town loosely following a map but being pretty sure of his destination. He recalled the beautiful mountainous backdrop that surrounded the Vredeshoek area. The Devils Peak climbed high into the darkened sky usually covered in swirling mists but still always seemed to be keeping an eye on what was happening in the houses below. As Mark's mind wandered he missed the turning into the road, cursed and span the car around. The day was still hot, despite turning to dusk and he had taken the opportunity to wear as little as possible so he would be ready for 'action'. Mark Smit thought himself a ladies man, had befriended many although had never actually managed to find one who wanted his body. Always he spent his money on meals and flowers before finding he was just not the right type for the girl he so desired. Celestine had been different. She had spotted him and made a move that had given him little option. Even when she had whispered hot messages in his ear and he had to tell her of his virginity, this didn't provoke a bad reaction. He even got the feeling that she was a touch turned on by this. He parked his car as she had told him a few metres away from the buildings. Moving towards the small secure complex of townhouses he was spotted almost immediately by a security guard who was sweating in his heavy clothing. This guard thought he had seen everything having been in the business for a number of years, working nights when the worst of humanity were in the streets. Mark's t-shirt and light pants seemed to induce a feeling of jealousy in the guard who took a dislike to him as soon as he spoke. "I'm here to see Celestine Duncan she's at number 17, can you let her know I'm here?" With a look of contempt the guard went to his little security hut and phoned through to her. Within the next few seconds the gates into the townhouse block were opened and the guard waved an arm to tell him to go through. As he looked at the numbers of the buildings he felt as though he was being watched although he wasn't sure if that was by the residents or from the Devils Peak. He relaxed or at least tried to as he spotted her number. The door was open and he moved inside. He was sure he heard a child crying then a door slam before being conscious of steps down a staircase and the appearence of Celestine. She looked more beautiful than he remembered and he thought that she too was dressed for one reason - to remove her clothing quickly and be ready for him. At least that was what he hoped. "Hi hun," she said to him before placing a kiss on cheek, moving slowly away from his face as though to encourage him to pull her back onto his lips. Mark felt nervous and Celestine instead ushered him into the lounge and asked if he would like a drink. She had some red wine that always had a touch of seduction and brought in two glasses from the kitchen setting them down on a coffee table. "Take a seat, er, Mark isn't it?" Celestine questioned Mark was looking at the room. The oak wood colouring gave a feel of morbidness and the dark carpet seemed to pull him into it. The darkened curtains were almost pulled shut probably to keep out the heat and he did feel a chill, almost a cool feeling in the air. Turning towards Celestine he wanted to say something but nothing would come. Instead he sat down on a chair picking the wine up as he went. Celestine waited until Mark began to drink the wine then let herself indulge in a glass. At first as he sipped the liquid he coughed and spluttered. The taste was blood. Mark's head began to spin, feeling himself look around and around, the room was closing in on him faster than he could breathe. During this time the one constant in front of his face was the woman who seemed to be dripping the wine over herself, covering her breasts in red. Hands helped him up the stairs, his feet gripping air and the next moment he was in a room, on a bed, she was naked on top of him. He passed out realising the dripping wine had been his blood. "I have my a virgin to satisfy the cravings of darkness and spirits within me. Let me see my master again......" she spoke into the room. The child had begun to cry as he heard his mother crash and bang in the room adjacent to his. Demons arrived before the his eyes ripping him through the walls of the room taking him on a journey into his mothers mind, leaving him feeling her hatred of the world as she abused her victim lying below her. Hearing her shout 'WHY?' he broke free of the dark ones and hid under the bed in tears covered in bruises. He also wondered the same question as his mother and why he was being subjected to this. Mark could no longer feel his groin area when he regained his full strength. The woman, and he didn't even want to speak her name, began chanting around an array of knives in the centre of the room. Slowly his hands felt around himself and the centre of this body. This was wet with something, a combination of his fluids mixed with 'hers'? He wasn't sure and brought his fingers up to his nose finding the most nauseating smell of the beast's sex mixed with his own semen. As Celestine became engaged in another world, Mark found a chance to break free. His clothes were thrown around the floor thankfully within range of the bed. Quietly and slowly he dressed, finally sneaking on his shoes. He felt unclean and sick. Building up strength he moved towards the door. Mark heard her insane voice wrapped around others in chants of destruction, disorder and chaos. He wondered where all these sounds were coming from, then noticed the room next to hers. Although the night had entered the house now Mark was still able to see his way around. A key was inserted in the lock. Mark could hear a whimpering noise that he thought could be a small child but he was too scared to turn that key. What would he find? Before he had chance to think further he heard a low growling noise coming from where he had escaped. Now there appeared to be lights flashing. Mark had to escape before she saw him or something else did. He was too late as a bolt of pure evil hit him entering through his skull with lightning speed. "I must get away. I must get away", Mark kept repeating this thoughts as he plummeted down the staircase throwing open the front door that slammed back behind him. Looking back at the house he thought he saw a thousand eyes stare back. Almost breaking into a run and falling onto the gates he managed to sweat out a 'I must get away from here' to the security guard. The guard laughed at him thinking he had just had too much of a good thing. As Mark ran down the road thought, the guard began to wonder what had gone on and penciled in his diary about house number 17. No-one had been all that familiar with the woman who had moved in. She seemed alone with a job or wanting one. Money seemed to pour from somewhere or someone to keep her living in such an exclusive property. The guard had never questioned about this. He was nearing the end of his night-time shift and concluded that he was employed to look after the comings and goings of the residents, not about their life and lifestyles. There was something bothering him though. Maybe he would discuss this with Joan Liebenberg. She was a kindly old soul that lived at number 19 and kept a dossier on the residents although not official, just for gossip. Mark's car sped away leaving tyre marks on the roadway. The noise broke the evenings silence and brought a smell of exhaust fumes into the warm night air. The car sped as far away as possible from that so-called 'peaceful corner' as it could, eventually stopping at the waterfront. There he got out and felt his stomach start to retch. Zombie-like he fell unsteadily along the sands through old ashes of fires, not caring where he was going. There seemed to be something following him as he moved. Eventually he fell to the sand and the sickness started. As his body spewed out all it's contents through tear stained eyes he saw creatures move forward eating his gut wrenching puke. He waved a hand to try to clear them, suddenly a vision came upon him. An angel appeared looking down. "You have engaged in adultplay with the woman of the beast? Your soul is no-more. Would you like redemption?" Mark looked closely at the angel who offered to save him. The beauty of the creature was so out of keeping with the evening he had suffered. "Please, help me", he said. The angel lost its wings and the brightness of white, laughed, turning into a one horned firey beast. Falling from the skies upon Mark he banished him from the earth. The body lay for a few more hours being ripped apart by the hungry demons leaving only clothes and a few chewed bones as Mark's legacy to his existence. Now he too burnt in hell and waited for Celestines next victim. "There are no angels here," Djinn casually reflected on what he was unleashing upon the earth. © 2008 Natalie C and Gary H Collaborative WritingsFeatured Review
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