Eternal Souls

The first piece we've ever written together

 

 Love lingers on the lonely shore
Kisses blow in the breeze
Wishing to find the two souls who never gave in
Never gave up
Aimlessly wandering with enchanted hearts
Looking for purity
To find each other again
With honesty and splendor
Rekindling a spark
That life had decided to pull apart

Divine adoration
Seductive eyes
Upon the sand eroded rocks
The caressing of waves rhythmical lapping
Whilst bodies never missed a beat
Romeo serenaded over the sweet seas
Looking for his departed...

Into eternity’s arms
Her yearning found it's way to passionate embrace
Breathing devotion
A dance of romance
The promise of better days
Starlight rays
Blazing a raging fire forever into eternity

The celestial moonlight offering a delicate taste
As pulses race
Fingertips touch
A delicate caress
Wishing they would stay close together
Wings outstretched lift them up

Away

Away

Into the dark captivating night
Spirits in radiant splendor
Angels beckoning them towards Cupid's heaven

 

 

Reviews

[Nick Erickson]

"Love lingers on the lonely shore"

The shore this poem takes me to is not one along a sea shore, but a celestial one, filled with stars and planets, one with an infinity of directions to take and endless miles to explore.
Excellent imagery.
Well done!!

[Tania Leigh]

I always appreciate a beautiful write such as this wonderful collaboration between you two.
I hope to see more!

One must admire their devotion:

"Wishing to find the two souls who never gave in
Never gave up
Aimlessly wandering with enchanted hearts
Looking for purity
To find each other again
With honesty and splendor
Rekindling a spark
That life had decided to pull apart"

[Floating on the feather..]

Perfectly divine.
An extraordinary collaboration. I love your work, you both seem to work in complete accordance and complement each other's abilities.

Great work.

[George Love]

This is quite good. Maybe more collaborations are in order.

[Ryan Jaimz Knight]

Please don't mistake my words, but I have recently reviewed a lot of poems about two people being in love, and spirits connecting, etc... In essence, I am sorta burned out on reading them. This is a nice piece, but I would appreciate it if for the time being you guys sent me requests only for poems that aren't about love and metaphysical connections thereof :) Please?

BJH

[youngwriter222]

"Love lingers on the lonely shore
Kisses blow in the breeze"

How sweet. Very passionate, showing unconditional love

Sarah

[Jenny Davis]

Breathtaking! I love pieces about kindred spirits and you guys did a beautiful job with this...great imagery and of course the emotion came leaking out onto the page and into my eyes...great stuff :)

[Robert Luna]

You both work so wonderfully together. You are able to complement each others words grandly. I always enjoy seeing what the two of you are able to come up with. Beautifully written and the words play like a wonderful love song.



Well Done!!!!!

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

A lovely collaboration between the two of you with such beautiful, longing sentiments. Thank you for sharing. Truly a joy to read this morning. This kind of love is Unconditional and everlasting and the kind that we all seek.
Light,
Siddartha

[Dressed in Poetry]

I like the diction here; it's very good. Nicely done.

[The Tao of Bri]

sigh....savoring.. this is most enchanting!~B