Eternal Souls

The first piece we've ever written together

 

 Love lingers on the lonely shore
Kisses blow in the breeze
Wishing to find the two souls who never gave in
Never gave up
Aimlessly wandering with enchanted hearts
Looking for purity
To find each other again
With honesty and splendor
Rekindling a spark
That life had decided to pull apart

Divine adoration
Seductive eyes
Upon the sand eroded rocks
The caressing of waves rhythmical lapping
Whilst bodies never missed a beat
Romeo serenaded over the sweet seas
Looking for his departed...

Into eternity’s arms
Her yearning found it's way to passionate embrace
Breathing devotion
A dance of romance
The promise of better days
Starlight rays
Blazing a raging fire forever into eternity

The celestial moonlight offering a delicate taste
As pulses race
Fingertips touch
A delicate caress
Wishing they would stay close together
Wings outstretched lift them up

Away

Away

Into the dark captivating night
Spirits in radiant splendor
Angels beckoning them towards Cupid's heaven

 

 

Reviews

[Nick Erickson]

"Love lingers on the lonely shore"

The shore this poem takes me to is not one along a sea shore, but a celestial one, filled with stars and planets, one with an infinity of directions to take and endless miles to explore.
Excellent imagery.
Well done!!

[Brenda Sue]

I love the imagery in this piece. You two did a wonderful job together. Beautifully penned. Great write.

[John Stussy]

Amazing write here of two separated souls. Guess love is strong enough that even incredible distances can't stop it.

[Steven Pottle]

Wow- what a beautiful write. I was physically sitting up straight as I read along- it actually lifted me! What a great collaboration- not sure I could do that, but you both were meant to be- creatively AND spiritually.

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

What a gorgeous write. You two write wonderfully together. Nicely Done.


Great Write.
Rayne

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

You two write so well together.. something i can't do , never tried much . you words fit the other's perfectly.
The poem is so romantic , i love romance .. xoxo

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

This is a very intresting piece. I think when reading this it feels like they die at sea or athe beach. The souls linger and still haunt the lonely beach. A great inspirational write you two. A very melancholy write!!

[*** Hey Jude***]

This is a joining of to writers that was meant to be. You are woven so closely together in spirit I can't tell that there are two narrators...the two have become one with a beautiful outcome

[Fantasyfairy]

The two of you are so good at writing together, and this is no different. Beautifully written with a nice flow. XX

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

Mmm, this is such a beautiful poem. You two write so well together. Fantastic work!!!

Heather

[Dead Angel]

"Angels beckoning them towards Cupid's heaven"

oh i love that line!! very sweet and romanitc, absolutely great description!! you both collaborate very well, one of the best pieces of writing i've read so far!! great job to you both. :)