Eternal Souls

The first piece we've ever written together

 

 Love lingers on the lonely shore
Kisses blow in the breeze
Wishing to find the two souls who never gave in
Never gave up
Aimlessly wandering with enchanted hearts
Looking for purity
To find each other again
With honesty and splendor
Rekindling a spark
That life had decided to pull apart

Divine adoration
Seductive eyes
Upon the sand eroded rocks
The caressing of waves rhythmical lapping
Whilst bodies never missed a beat
Romeo serenaded over the sweet seas
Looking for his departed...

Into eternity’s arms
Her yearning found it's way to passionate embrace
Breathing devotion
A dance of romance
The promise of better days
Starlight rays
Blazing a raging fire forever into eternity

The celestial moonlight offering a delicate taste
As pulses race
Fingertips touch
A delicate caress
Wishing they would stay close together
Wings outstretched lift them up

Away

Away

Into the dark captivating night
Spirits in radiant splendor
Angels beckoning them towards Cupid's heaven

 

 

Reviews

[Nick Erickson]

"Love lingers on the lonely shore"

The shore this poem takes me to is not one along a sea shore, but a celestial one, filled with stars and planets, one with an infinity of directions to take and endless miles to explore.
Excellent imagery.
Well done!!

[Nix]

Aw, I just love this one. Even though there's a sense of longing there is such a lovely serene feeling about this. I think you've both carefully chosen and placed words to create something really special here and its left me inspired. I also like the picture you've chosen, the whole thing is perfect! Thank you for entering it into my competition, just reading through entries now. :) ~ nix

[Patrica Alvarez]

Beautiful

[Brandy Garrett]

This poem is a "breathing emotion" and a "dance of romance". Loved the poem. I have a weakness for romantic poetry and your poem gives me much hope. Thank you for sharing!

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Beautifully written. Enjoyed reading this lovely poem. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[Celtic Cat]

very sweet!! Such a wonderful blend it's hard to tell where one leaves off and the other begins. Just like love. : )

[~Wandering Soul~]

this is so BEAUTIFUL again
you two write such amazing things together
i love the last line especially
Angels beckoning them towards Cupid's heaven
it gives off so much peacful emotion and love
i love it lol
thanks for sharin
xx

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

BEAUTIFUL .. still a pleasure to read.

Chloe
xoxo

Rekindling a spark

That life had decided to pull apart


This is wonderful because it could either be, as the poem suggests, that there is a distance between them over seas, or it could be from different worlds, across the stars with an endless ammount of space to lose and find themselves in- pretty indeed!:D

xx

[ELii]

Very beautiful and enchanting. A very sweet serenade of love. Great imagery.

[OrAnGe SmArTiEs]

A poem of love!!! Its very well written!
I think you should write together more often, it turns out to be great work!
Well done to both of you!