In View

In View

A Poem by Lucien

Perceived beauty,

Primal blessings left buried

Away in the subconscious

It's all an image

 

Pawp' the batteries in and

Fall back,

Click it on

Watch as angel's disappear

 

Eclectically stack faces and bodies

Skies and smiles

Don't ever look back

© 2008 Lucien


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Nice use of your word play. It really made this piece stand out. What got my attention most was " It's all an image" That one made me think. We play into what so many others want us to see instead of what our heart sees. Image is such a piece of life that we forget. Great piece.

Live, Love and Learn

Lady V

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on September 22, 2008

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Lucien
Lucien

Toronto, Canada



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