The Way She Looked

A Beauty that captured me...

The Way She Looked : By John D. Walker

 

She captured my gaze when she looked my way

She was so sensual, mysterious, so all alluring  

For a moment, I found I could not look away

My eyes locked, captivated, so all enduring

 

Afraid of loosing control, not wanting to be the fool 

Waiting for the right moment, if there would be 

Then she was gone, while I only held my cool

I look back wondering, now her is all I can see

 

A moment lost, could there have more 

Lost in a memory, dwelling on the unknown

Her lure holding my mind on a distant shore

Wanting her close, for all that has not been sown

 

What should I have done, as I could only look on

Hoping for more, my life goes on, for my being only willed 

Wishing and only wanting, we have become only but a pone

If you would be mine, for only moment, my soul now fulfilled

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"A moment lost, could there have more

Lost in a memory, dwelling on the unknown"
Those lines stood out for me in this nice , well penned poem...:)

[Jaclyn]

Again, some of the grammar and misspellings are a bit disconcerting, but this is a mysterious, graceful read. Good job.