True Love's Bite

My eternally unfinished poem it pains me to even read the thing

The girl I love towards me feels naught
Though she occupies my every thought
For her I'd lay down my life
Shield her from sorrow and strife
She pulled me from the depths of hell
It pains me to bid her farewell 
I wish to be more then friends
But I fear for when that relationship ends

Reviews

[EZ Writer]

Aww, what a touching and very
evocative write..
So passionately expressed,
farewell's can be a real heart breaker!
Best regards, Easy

[Beth Winter]

Oh, the unwanted rending. You wove emotions beautifully with smooth rhyme. Well done

[MysticMirage]

Awe :) This is one of thoswe bitter sweet poems written straight from a poets heart.
Hope it turns out well.
Oh and I love rhymes :>
Well done!

[Daytonight]

Oh this write is so very poignant! I can so relate to this one. Great rhyme and flow as usual. I am thoroughly enjoying your poems. Keep up the great work.