suicide note

i was feeling down the other day. depression got the best of me.

Today i found my way,

to be the son you want.

To stop the yelling,

and create love.

 

Some say this is cowardice

others weak

I find it the only way.

 

I will finally make

YOUR utopia real

 

goodbye friends and family

I love you brother

i'm glad we were friends

we were close but,

this is my end.

 

Author's Note

the "brother i speak of is one of my closest friend not a legit brother. meaning that last stanza is all to him.

Reviews

[TheRoot]

deep *snaps fingers* ---'this is my end' capitalized your poem. Well said