The Ceiling and Her

The Ceiling and Her

A Poem by JohnThomIV
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This poem is about the one that got away and thinking about memories with a girl.

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The ceiling shares my memories,

The fan blades pass one by one,

Thoughts are killing me,

I want this thinking to be done.


I can see me and her

Under the stars at night,

Locked eyes in the river,

Piggy back rides because she’s light


Late night drives

We lost track of time,

Two different lives

Yet I wish she were mine.


I long to go back,

Then I snap out of the trance,

Tracing every crack,

Between the ceiling and the fan.

© 2024 JohnThomIV


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I can see past memories haunting again and again in this poem. Good writing

Posted 1 Month Ago


JohnThomIV

1 Month Ago

Thank you for the kind words.
Arundass TP

1 Month Ago

Welcome friend 😊

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Added on July 25, 2024
Last Updated on July 25, 2024
Tags: poetry, romance, sad, thinking

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JohnThomIV
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Hello, I am 23 years old and I just love to write poems in my free time. I'm using this to get feedback on my poems, learn more, and improve. more..

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