The Sadness Within

Hours and hours passes by

Waiting for you to reply

Oh how every waiting minutes saddens me

Such disturbance to my serenity

 

How can you communicate well with other guys?

And not the guy who loves you more than his life?

Whose heart belongs to you,

But what about yours?

To whom does it really belong to?

 

I'm not sure if you really do have time for me

Or is it a waste of your time for you to be with me?

You're all that I can think about

But my heart, why is it filled with worries and doubts?

Every sorrow beat crawls pass my legs and to my feet

Leading me to an end my life will meet

First step, second step, third step, fourth

I ponder as I walk muttering back and forth

Fifth step, sixth step, seventh step, eighth

Days without you are the days I hate

Those smiles you use to see are slowly fading away

And I just really don't know what to do anymore I must say

Life's maybe short as we all know, but is it time for me to go?

Should I drop this knife or completely end my life?

I'm afraid you'd go if these were there to show

So everytime you're by my side, I pretend to be all right

 

I'm sorry if I'm acting like this

I'm sorry if I'm asking all these

It took a while for me to write these down

I had to make every words count

And each word has its own tears

Tears that fell for my mind to clear

So if you're reading this, there's nothing to worry about

I'm just glad I didn't have to shout it out

Now all I want is for everything to mend

And to descend the sadness within

 

Reviews

[❤ Maggie ❤..]

Oh my goodness...Perfect is the only word I can use to describe this. This is the most accurate thing I've ever read. I was singing this in my head to myself when I read it. Wow. Like I'm seriously speechless this was so good. Amazing write John! I feel like you're writing keeps getting better and better every time I read it!

[DarkRainbowPie]

You've definitely got the makings of a very good poem here. I don't know what it is, but it's not quite catching my full attention. It kind of feels like you've tried to say too much in the one piece with these words? :) Might be better cut in half!

[angelina neves]

beautiful!
"First step, second step, third step, fourth

I ponder as I walk muttering back and forth

Fifth step, sixth step, seventh step, eighth

Days without you are the days I hate

Those smiles you use to see are slowly fading away"

[Chey_6]

this made me cry.......but I know how you feel. we do need more time together to try and sort things out

[Krista Weiss]

Aww! So sad! :( I know how you feel... I've been there so many times and it really sucks! Really great poem!!