A Chance, Once More

Drowned in my own sorrow
Hoping there will be a tomorrow
A chance to see
A chance to be with
A chance I barely got
It felt like I've been shot

I know you'd come again
I know you'd come knockin'
Rappin', tappin' on my door
And I'll be there to answer
Only you and nothing more

Once more, I'd see your smile
And mine would go on for miles
Once more, I'd see the seraph's beauty
And hear the flowing euphony
Once more, the pendulous heart of mine
Would rise again and shine

Shine brighter than the sky
Shine brighter than the sun
Brighter than bright
Blinding my sight
Shine like heaven's light
Like Earth's brightest night

Like Romeo and Juliet,
O the lips of thee
Doth the sealing of breath's gate
Let the lips do what palms do
And let them mate
But where art thou?
Shouldn't you be hither
For my love to be proven?
But if you decided to show up,
I won't be in the hidden
I'll always be here waiting, waiting...

Reviews

[Kitty Davies]

Nice poem, but I see some inflections of Poe through out this piece. Instead of Romeo and Juliet, I would suggest Rosalind and Orlando due to their store being a bit more compelling through trials and tribulations of As You Like It.

[angelina neves]

lovely poem!
- why do we need at least 25 words to say we liked a poem?!

[Krista Weiss]

Wow! Beautiful poem!! :) Great job!!

[J.R. Asor_28]

Thanks krista :)

[GirlOnFire]

This poem is so Simply fantastic ...

*
Like Romeo and Juliet,
O the lips of thee
Doth the sealing of breath's gate
Let the lips do what palms do
And let them mate
But where art thou?
Shouldn't you be hither
For my love to be proven?
But if you decided to show up,
I won't be in the hidden
I'll always be here waiting, waiting...
*
I love this stanza ...
Seriously, this poem captivate my heart ..

Keep the job well done :))

[J.R. Asor_28]

Thanks, secretly!

[❤ Maggie ❤..]

This was seriously the most beautiful thing I have read on this website. Your words were absolutely amazing and I felt pulled into another world while reading. The flow of this poem was perfect and really shows how true love should be, although many don't see it anymore. Well done with this poem! Definetly one that should/WILL go far!(:

[J.R. Asor_28]

Thank you, Maggie :) I hope it would go far too!

[❤ Maggie ❤]

:)

[Chey_6]

Aww so sweet love :* nice pic too :P looks familiar

[J.R. Asor_28]

haha thanks sweetheart! and yeah it kinda looks like you ;) lolz

[J.R. Asor_28]

i had to screenshot it! you look cute!

[Chey_6]

I look like a chipmunk! Lol

[J.R. Asor_28]

soooooo chipmunks are cute and its even cuter wen u do the face!!

[Chey_6]

:P it's cute when you do it too ;) lol

[J.R. Asor_28]

Have I did it before?! I don't remember!

[Chey_6]

Yes babe you have done it :* it's freaking adorable!!

[SyberRose]

Like Romeo and Juliet,
O the lips of thee
Doth the sealing of breath's gate

Lovely poem...Enjoyed reading...Rose

[J.R. Asor_28]

Thanks rose!