For At Least A Few Minutes

I laid down heartbroken

Pondering of you

Not a word nor a whisper, none spoken

What to do? What to do?

 

I wish you were here with me

I want to feel your touch

I want to see your smile

I miss you so much

 

For at least a few minutes

I could've spend my time with you

And all those sweet messages

I can make it all come true

 

For at least a few minutes

I could be kissing you

I could be holding your hands

And hear you say "I love you!"

 

We coud've been watching the stars

And I'd enjoy it

We wouldn't be far apart

For at least a few minutes

Reviews

[DarkRainbowPie]

Really nice piece, sad to reach the end so sudden so, I feel like there's more to say in this one, some very intimate thoughts being shared here! :)

[GirlOnFire]

This is amazing :)
i love each stanzas ...

Nice work :) Keep it up friend :)

[❤ Maggie ❤..]

This is wonderful! So sad, and perfect! Great write, John!

[Krista Weiss]

Aww! Really great poem!!

[Chey_6]

I love this one babe

[J.R. Asor_28]

Thnx sweety!

[Ravyne Hawke]

A touching love poem of want and need. Love the flow and rhythm of this. Well done.

[AdorableDreams]

This was so nice, I love the flow of this poem.

[Talal Hussain]

Nice job Rick :-)