Journeyman

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What are you doing
Loitering in the margins
Of eternity?

I am simply here,
Shedding light on the twin rogues
Of time and of space.

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Like the question and answer format as that in itself begs questions and allows the reader to generate images. The age old question of what are we, who are we and why are we here set in a few salient lines. Time is indeed a rogue to us as we shuffle off, but space is, to me at least, a wonder, filled with posibilities.

[John]

Or modern science suggests that they are inextricable with the exotic and difficult to conceive phenomenon of spacetime. I describe them as rogues given that space and time may be manifestations of a more fundamental reality, as proposed by the the American psychologist Donald Hoffmann

[Ken Simm.]

Oh clever and crystal thinking. So many lines of importance in this perfectly formed small but multi layered piece. I really enjoyed its intelligence.

[John]

Thanks ever so much

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love this...
we are old rogue poets who definitely need more light than we shed.
Our words still trying to keep up...
I really like "margins of eternity" that is crisp...
j.

[John]

Glad you liked it Jacob