Just random fun

Just random fun

A Poem by But,itis,theend

Men have honor
Women have tact
A pair forever
Together we lack

If we'd only be fair
Eyes speaking plain
Hiding regardless
Fearing the pain

The cycle of reality
Is incrediblely tiring
It's all identical
It sends me flying

© 2019 But,itis,theend


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You had me until line 4. Most both doesn't come off well. The last line could also use some work. However, the over all message is clear and understandable. Relationships can get too complicated and tiring. It leaves you wanting more than you can get.

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But,itis,theend
But,itis,theend

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Good place to let it fly. I wish only to let it go. more..

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