Stages Of Love

Stages Of Love

A Poem by Jay
"

I used to love him.

"

I look at you,

I see no more,

Than what I saw before;

Ignorance,

Arrogance.


I look at you,

I see more,

Than what I saw before;

Beauty,

Brains.


I look at you,

I see something,

That wasn't there before;

Intensity,

Intuition.


I look at you,

I see something,

That was there before nothing;

Hatred,

Loathing.

© 2011 Jay


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Describes exactly my latest relationship. I like the cleanness of an not-so-clean subject.

Posted 13 Years Ago


this is truly how we feel when love starts and what we sometimes feel when love goes. Nice job Jay! This is awesome!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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