True love starts somewhere.........

True love starts somewhere.... ( A Poem for Hazel)

When bond is complete,

Words will be spoken,

Who will speak first,

The heart as a token.

The look in her eye,

His strong embrace,

Both feel the gravity,

The emotions of grace

For here they will find.....

Oath carved in stone,

Never to be broken,

Who will speak first,

True love has woken.

XXXXXXXXXXX

John Phoenix Hutchinson (c) 2013

Reviews

[Herman Martin]

truer words were never spoken

[An owl on the moon]

A beautiful, lifting dedication. There is such a feeling of joy that rises in this awakening.

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Thank you Craig!

[CharM105]

i agree --- got to start somewhere! great writing!

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

The start of something big :)

[wordwarrior]

Very beautiful indeed. Such emotion weave through your words and the imagery makes one sigh. Great flow and rhyme too.

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Thanks WW and for the competition placing :)

[Sami Khalil]

Soooo beautiful and well spoken. I like the rhyming scheme too ...Bravo

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

A pleasure Sami as always :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Sue]

Nice to see a new poem - lovely :)

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Take a break from the mountains occasionally..........

[lothlorienwriter]

Ah I know what just your saying here I think John........Who will say I love you first! You big softy you! Top work.

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Cheers Mark :)

[PublishingAgent]

Id love to know what "Hazel" thought of this poem you have written for her. Did she melt? I bet she did! :) I would for sure!

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

I'll let you know Emma.............