Affectionate Anna and her dancing feet.

Anna and here feet dancing under the table........sigh.

Affectionate Anna

Ten digits lined up in two rows,

Five by five with dancing bows,

Daintily tapping on the wooden floor,

Her gentle feet moved gracefully,

I longed for more.

Choreographed by legs, so smooth, so slender,

I raised my longing gaze over her feminine gender,

Subtle lines that strongly, raised my heart a beat ,

True consummate beauty,

Vision so complete.

Here I entered into vision hazel scene

Losing my thoughts in her daylight dreams,

Those worldly eyes, her longing stare,

Undressed my soul in purity,

Stripped me down bare.

Author's Note

Anna's Cute feet dancing daintily under the table..........

Reviews

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Such a sweet and sublime write! I love the imagery of the woman and her dancing feet; but especially the regard with which the poet looks upon something that so many would overlook. I think that true love is taking notice of the little things and loving them as though they are the big things. Very nice flow and style to this one.

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Yes the little things add up and make magic.....................

[Sue]

Am being to see rather a poignant yet sweet side to many of your poems John, and this is no exception...

[Prritiy]

loved to read it and imagine the feelings behind it, written so nicely with purity.

[Abdul Batin Osman Bey]

Cool poem reminds me of my wife who use to be a ballet dancer,I really enjoyed the last verse it's very romantic.

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

ABOB! Thanks:)

[TrimarcoRansome]

Lovely little poem! Created real imagery as I read it ans what a sweet topic too! Another blinder!!

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

HTR......your going to be famous!

[Barbara Walker]

Each stanza is beautiful! Great rhymes, imagery, rhythm and flow. Especially like those last three lines. Kudos!

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Thank you BW :)

[lothlorienwriter]

John am used to your more masculine work but I have noticed your more subtle sensual pieces tend to go down a storm, like your "Her Perfect Breasts" this could rival well that!?

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Well I dont know about that but yeah this was a pleasant distraction.....

[Robbie~xoxo~]

What a romantic dreamy write, John! The third stanza swept me away... swoon worthy indeed!
This is pure magic, my friend!


"Here I entered into vision hazel scene

Losing my thoughts in her daylight dreams,

Those worldly eyes, her longing stare,

Undressed my soul in purity,

Stripped me down bare."~ Lovely! :)

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Robbie thank you X

[PublishingAgent]

John this is just so delightful your such an observant man, you can see that in all your poems from mountains to dragons, from the subtle sensual to the mystical magical. In this you have taken a simple thing and expressed so well the joy it gave you. Top marks.

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

I am certain I have become more observant as my poetry has got better......serendipity also plays a part with this kind of poem too........