John's First Senryu set to photo.

Syber Rose is doing my head in with these Japanese forms but its all good education I guess :)

easy recipe

make cheap holy water pure

boil hell out of it

Author's Note

Come on laugh!!!

Reviews

[Holly Mason]

alrighty sure did...cracked up truly
creative, unique
hope you win...
thank you for sharing and more thanks for the laugh

[Marie]

I did laugh John. I heard the story once: There was a bunch of passengers on a ship nce, and they all wanted to take communion together. But the Ctholics wanted wine, and the Baptists insisted on grape juice. So it was decided to boil the wine, thus removing the alcohol from it...
Actuallu I don't think that worked out very well.

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Ha Ha......am not certain but if you boil wine don't you make Brandy!

[TrimarcoRansome]

Hahahaah Brilliant!

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Tis my first in 5 7 5 funny form :)

[s y e]

Ha, you gotta love, Rose! (: This was amazing, she's a good teacher, hahaha!

~ Noodle.

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Yes indeed but she does nag a bit ;)

[s y e]

Haha, maybe so but look at what you've achieved. (; Ha!

[Sirius King]

lol...this is good!

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

My first :) Thanks

[SyberRose]

Good job...i was thinking boil had two syllables but it must be my accent ha...i looked it up and it has one.
Thanks for posting...:)http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/Funny-Senryu-contest-/48353/

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Your wouldnt believe the trouble that word gave me.......but 5 out of 5 counters have confirmed it as 1! SyberRose your be the death of me :)

[SyberRose]

Dont forget the copyrights for that other photo and take off the capitals ...i know...nag nag nag

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Done! """""Tea Break""""