John's First Haiku Set to Photo.

John's First Haiku Set to Photo.

A Poem by John Phoenix Hutchinson.
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Yes I have lost my Haiku virginity here! Result of a Syber Rose challenge after I said i didnt "get" these Haiku poems. She educated me am glad to say.

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luminosity.
beacon of divinity
giving hope and love.

© 2013 John Phoenix Hutchinson.


Author's Note

John Phoenix Hutchinson.
Didn't turn out too bad might have another go sometime.

http://apod.nasa.gov/apod/ap130126.html
Image Credit & Copyright: Sebastian Saarloos

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wow enchanting. great haiku.

Posted 11 Years Ago


John Phoenix Hutchinson.

11 Years Ago

Cheers.....its not to often am impressed with my own work but this turned out a peach :)
You first is luminous with beauty...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


John Phoenix Hutchinson.

11 Years Ago

Am happy you think so.......turned out quite well for a first attempt......must try again to see if .. read more
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

K. You are welcome...:).....
Not as easy as they look are they, this is a jolly good first attempt though, pat on the back!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


John Phoenix Hutchinson.

11 Years Ago

One tries ones best doesn't one.
Ha! I have lost my haiku virginity in the Cafe, too! Lovely, both picture and words. Angi~

Posted 11 Years Ago


John Phoenix Hutchinson.

11 Years Ago

Cheers Angi am glad I waited till I was 45 to loose it!
Angi

11 Years Ago

Ha! ...and I thought I was a late bloomer at 42!
Well done haiku! An impressive first!

Posted 11 Years Ago


John Phoenix Hutchinson.

11 Years Ago

It is! Am worried that I peaked to soon!
Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Nah - Haiku come easier the more you do them. :)
i'm glad you posted this...nicely done...very lovely John...:)) the only thing is I forgot to tell you no capitals.

Posted 11 Years Ago


John Phoenix Hutchinson.

11 Years Ago

now its right:)
John Phoenix Hutchinson.

11 Years Ago

boil is one according to the 5 different counters ive used including a posh haiku one.
SyberRose

11 Years Ago

Right...its just my american accent haa..
Gorgeous haiku, lovely picture, you nailed it with this one!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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John Phoenix Hutchinson.

11 Years Ago

Its all downhill from here might retire on a high!
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Haha that'll learn ya not to get it perfect the first time! ;-)
Its very nice the haiku and the picture too.

Posted 11 Years Ago


John Phoenix Hutchinson.

11 Years Ago

Yes it went well with the picture......my blessings :)
Prritiy

11 Years Ago

:)
Perfect words to reflect the image. Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


John Phoenix Hutchinson.

11 Years Ago

Got to find another good picture If am to pull it off again me thinks. Thanks
Well this is much better than the crap you dished up yesterday. Bloody good for a first go! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


John Phoenix Hutchinson.

11 Years Ago

Ha ha! Do one!

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John Phoenix Hutchinson.
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