John's First Haiku Set to Photo.

Yes I have lost my Haiku virginity here! Result of a Syber Rose challenge after I said i didnt "get" these Haiku poems. She educated me am glad to say.

luminosity.
beacon of divinity
giving hope and love.

Author's Note

Didn't turn out too bad might have another go sometime.

http://apod.nasa.gov/apod/ap130126.html
Image Credit & Copyright: Sebastian Saarloos

Reviews

[Zahra]

wow enchanting. great haiku.

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Cheers.....its not to often am impressed with my own work but this turned out a peach :)

[Sami Khalil]

You first is luminous with beauty...:)

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Am happy you think so.......turned out quite well for a first attempt......must try again to see if it was beginners luck

[Sami Khalil]

K. You are welcome...:).....

[TrimarcoRansome]

Not as easy as they look are they, this is a jolly good first attempt though, pat on the back!!

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

One tries ones best doesn't one.

[Angi]

Ha! I have lost my haiku virginity in the Cafe, too! Lovely, both picture and words. Angi~

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Cheers Angi am glad I waited till I was 45 to loose it!

[Angi]

Ha! ...and I thought I was a late bloomer at 42!

[Rita L. Sev]

Well done haiku! An impressive first!

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

It is! Am worried that I peaked to soon!

[Rita L. Sev]

Nah - Haiku come easier the more you do them. :)

[SyberRose]

i'm glad you posted this...nicely done...very lovely John...:)) the only thing is I forgot to tell you no capitals.

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

NOW YOU TELL ME! :)

[SyberRose]

I had to change mine too...i had capitals

[SyberRose]

and paste the copyrights over from my authors notes.

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Yes Boss :) Senyru thingy uploading in 1 minute.

[SyberRose]

haa...th senyru has to be about humans not nature...

[SyberRose]

human nature

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

well i guess it is about humans.............

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

is religion classed as human nature?

[SyberRose]

satirical or ironic situations ...well not sure...i know its a touchy subject...

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

online

[SyberRose]

575

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

yes confirmed by two counts online as 5 7 5

[SyberRose]

i just looked but its not 575

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Word Count 15
Syllable Count 17
Character Count (alphanumeric) 58

Mean syllables per word 1.13
Mean characters per word 3.87

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

stupid blooming online counts ive used three and one says 17 one 9 and the other 21!

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

19

[SyberRose]

you can edit it ...yes seventeen is correct.5-7-5

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

now its right:)

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

boil is one according to the 5 different counters ive used including a posh haiku one.

[SyberRose]

Right...its just my american accent haa..

[Frieda P]

Gorgeous haiku, lovely picture, you nailed it with this one!

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Its all downhill from here might retire on a high!

[Frieda P]

Haha that'll learn ya not to get it perfect the first time! ;-)

[Prritiy]

Its very nice the haiku and the picture too.

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Yes it went well with the picture......my blessings :)

[Prritiy]

:)

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Perfect words to reflect the image. Well done.

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Got to find another good picture If am to pull it off again me thinks. Thanks

[PublishingAgent]

Well this is much better than the crap you dished up yesterday. Bloody good for a first go! :)

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Ha ha! Do one!