The Diabolical Death Of Sylvanie.

A witch is killed in my first novel, Arise the Stone Witches.




The Diabolical Death Of Sylvanie.


Her beauty flamed in divine fire

burning, yearning in my minds eye.
Her symmetry, her shapeliness,
spun the spell of Apollonian myth.

In allurements trap, I floundered.
 Venal vice, she held me ensnared.
 In intimacy with this devilish nymphet,
this malevolent spirit of darkness, I joined.

 My demise, her mindset in orgasmic throws.
To be slaughtered in a bed of diabolical deceit.
Her purpose was known to me but driven
 from my mind by passions entrapment.

Her long cascading locks, entwined round my
neck as if they had an evil will of their own.
A feminine tress, a noose of golden flow.
Strangulating the very life out of me.

The pain, the torment of imminent death
broke the hold of passions spell.
I grapple and grasp with my free hand,
for under my pillow laid the witch's bane.

Cold hard heavy hilt of blackest onyx,
 with bright white crystal luminescent blade.
 A lightening blow bolts to evils eye!
The dagger overwhelms her brain.

To you or me an instant death, life hangs on to this foe.
Held strong by murderous carnal embrace.
We fight in lascivious blows of orgiastic legend.
I draw the blade out, a pitched hideous scream!

I stab her in frozen heart, still she lives on.
Many times now, in a frantic frenzy I strike.
The b***h starts to burn slowly, smoking at first.
I escape her coitus clamp and golden noose.

Hells conflagration now before me stood.
Fire burning, raging from orifices bright,
A dragon incarnate, screaming flames.
Crying tears of black acid down blistering cheeks.

She implodes into a nothingness, a black hole,
Before exploding in an all consuming ash.
I choke on her cinders but embrace her embers in victory.
The death of a Witch........... Slyvanie.

Author's Note

A stand alone poem......but intended for a story line in my book Arise the Stone Witches. (Chapter 5).
Might do another poem at some point as Slyvanie has a twin sister who will be out for revenge.............

Reviews

[quinfinn]

i think i like this more than any other of your writes to date. i'm not going to write a long, drawn out dissertation because there are those lurking behind the larger minds who have precious little to do other than attack what they don't understand. this is an informal site for artists who share creative and informal forum about each others art, and, knowing that you are in fact gifted i will not malinger over the details at present. in short, this is a great poem!

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

My thanks Q :)I love Writers Cafe x

[quinfinn]

how can we not? you are welcome, poet!

[Ahmad Cox]

I agree though. A persons critique shouldn't be to criticize someones poems on small details or because they don't understand the poem or don't like the flow or the way it is written. As the old saying goes if you don't have sommething nice to say than don't say anything at all.

[The Random Writings Of ..]

Wow John, once again you have captivated the mind of the readers with the upcoming tidbits of the story! And here again we meet a new character. This piece is brilliant! So descriptive, and dark. I love how you describe her beauty in the beginning, and the vivid detail of her demise. You have a way with words that creates takes you into the piece. Thank you for sharing and I am looking forward to more!!! Much love my friend!

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Cheers Kate :) Nice to see you back online :)

[The Random Writings Of Me..Kates]

:) Thanks - Can't wait to read more!

[Junger]

Very deep in description of this death, i think you have still greater pieces of this in the future, i would truly like to read a book about this. In other words i can see this poem transform into a book

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

This scene is coming up soon in my book Arise the Stone Witches.

[Junger]

cool

[MOON]

A well crafted write, bubble bubble toil and trouble...lovely

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

:)moon

[Kelsey]

This is extremely interesting and quite unique. I always enjoy your choice of words and how you tell a story through poetry. Wonderful job, and thanks for sharing.

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

I am trying something different breaking from the mould with my witches so am glad you think this ones unique :)

[Claire Twinn]

Phew! What an epic battle, magnificently told.

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Epic indeed Claire thanks :)

[Nicky Sarti]

Beautiful words that fit totally with a great picture (got a skull thing going on!)
And looking forward to reading more of your work.

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Cheers Nicky :)

[Nicky Sarti]

Anytime, always meant x

[Krista Weiss]

Wow!! Really great poem!! :)

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

You think so??? Why :)

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Very creative and a great flow, loved it xx thanks for sharing :O)

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Sal.......your the Gal! :)

[Whitney Kleinhuizen]

Very descriptive and a great flow. Your way with words in this piece is wonderful. Well written

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Cheers my dears :)