Magnus Opus Hermeticus

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Magnus Opus Hermeticus

Crystal clear, the waters of life.
Shown to me by angels of grace.
I sing, to the mornings stars.
Lord, my soul cries for you.

Grounded on earth's foundations.
Focused on heavens divine light.
I enter through minds door.
 Immaterial vision awaits me.

A gift from the mercy of God.
I have been born in my mind!
Immortal, I stand before the mirror.
Deathless, till the end of time.

Now for a moment, I ascend.
Floating, through clouds of wisdom.
I bathe in a universal castile.
Cleansed of earthly immorality. 

No desecration within the all above.
No violation, in the celestial hallowed halls.
Here I gaze upon hope, imagination and love.
Framed, bound together in trinity.

Far then on winged feet, I travelled,
Not held by the circle of life.
Till time and space became nothingness.
I sped towards a singular light.

Where I am afforded a brief glimpse.
 A golden cup of pansophic truth.
Burning in enlightenment flame.
Blinded, I am sent back into minds eye.

I awake from the dream glad.
For in the heart of this man.
I have learned of greater mysteries.
For in searching for truth,my soul is stilled.

The eternal flame burns brightly.

Cum Luce Salutem.














 

 

Reviews

[Mia]

You're an incredible writer. Each time I read a new poem of yours, I am amazed at what your mind does with words. And it always seems effortless. Where to from here? The obvious answer seems down but I don't doubt that you will find a way to top this and again leave me in awe.

"For in searching for truth,my soul is stilled."

Seriously! What planet are you from!!!

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

I hope there is more of me to come form me as I only began writing two months ago when I joined here in fact. I have a lot of ideas in my head and my imagination has really grown since writing and my dreams and night have become quite amazing....am lucky in the fact I can remember most of my dreams. Thank you Mia for your very kind words.

[Mia]

You're clearly a natural...two months...that's amazing John! You are very welcome for my honest words.

[Larry Dyson]

send us link for the poem submission again please?

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

http://www.writerscafe.org/groups/The-Magical-Mythical-Mystery-Compendium/8970/

[Bats In The Belfry]

How upliftingly beautiful...it touched my heart and soul.

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Am so glad my art has such an effect.

[lee von cleef]

ah the truth and you have entered "The Ministry of Kindness" to put hope into our fainting hearts. sweet smooth write,do you ever sleep?

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

I work in my sleep....imagination is my best tool.

[lee von cleef]

I think you might be like "James...A....Michener "who had a team approach. Don't sleep through tomorrow because it will be Sunday.

[Gretchen Clarke]

This is simply amazing poetry! You should sumbit that into my contest, 'Ocean Deep Poetry'. I am adding this to my favorites!
100,000,000/100!

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

:)Thank you and I will!

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

cant find that contest.....can you send me a link :)

[Gretchen Clarke]

Here: http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/Ocean-Deep-Poetry/46431/ Ignore the 'Reading & Deliberating' ... I don't have enough entries to finish it.

[gombeggar]

interesting journey through your feelings of enlightenment...nicely done

[Stanley Wilson]

good work cleverly crafted the last verse was particularly striking enjoyed the journey

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

I was happy with the ending of the journey too....most kind thanks :)

[quinfinn]

all i can say is awesome!

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Am so glad the beautiful, discerning, intelligent poets on Writers Cafe are enjoying this :)

[Mark]

A great vision with light, truth, and burning wisdom offered up in passionate, apocalyptic words. Enjoyed the read. :)

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Ahh a master :)

[Marie]

I kow what you were trying for, and I'm glad you made it.

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

I made it.....but only just. At last someone of intelligence who understands the concepts. I reckon Benny the Bear would be good at the metaphysical he is after all quite the philosopher!

[Marie]

Benny Bear understands anything that involves honey.