Magnus Opus Hermeticus

The great work hidden within.

Magnus Opus Hermeticus

Crystal clear, the waters of life.
Shown to me by angels of grace.
I sing, to the mornings stars.
Lord, my soul cries for you.

Grounded on earth's foundations.
Focused on heavens divine light.
I enter through minds door.
 Immaterial vision awaits me.

A gift from the mercy of God.
I have been born in my mind!
Immortal, I stand before the mirror.
Deathless, till the end of time.

Now for a moment, I ascend.
Floating, through clouds of wisdom.
I bathe in a universal castile.
Cleansed of earthly immorality. 

No desecration within the all above.
No violation, in the celestial hallowed halls.
Here I gaze upon hope, imagination and love.
Framed, bound together in trinity.

Far then on winged feet, I travelled,
Not held by the circle of life.
Till time and space became nothingness.
I sped towards a singular light.

Where I am afforded a brief glimpse.
 A golden cup of pansophic truth.
Burning in enlightenment flame.
Blinded, I am sent back into minds eye.

I awake from the dream glad.
For in the heart of this man.
I have learned of greater mysteries.
For in searching for truth,my soul is stilled.

The eternal flame burns brightly.

Cum Luce Salutem.














 

 

Reviews

[Mia]

You're an incredible writer. Each time I read a new poem of yours, I am amazed at what your mind does with words. And it always seems effortless. Where to from here? The obvious answer seems down but I don't doubt that you will find a way to top this and again leave me in awe.

"For in searching for truth,my soul is stilled."

Seriously! What planet are you from!!!

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

I hope there is more of me to come form me as I only began writing two months ago when I joined here in fact. I have a lot of ideas in my head and my imagination has really grown since writing and my dreams and night have become quite amazing....am lucky in the fact I can remember most of my dreams. Thank you Mia for your very kind words.

[Mia]

You're clearly a natural...two months...that's amazing John! You are very welcome for my honest words.

[Larry Dyson]

send us link for the poem submission again please?

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

http://www.writerscafe.org/groups/The-Magical-Mythical-Mystery-Compendium/8970/

[Bewitching Sensations]

well done.. loved it..

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Thanks Missy. Must likely my last one for a while.....but we shall see.

[Bewitching Sensations]

noooo dont talk like that.. be positive :)

[Mauricio Montoya]

very deep piece it has left me to ponder.
Excellent write.

[rnuff]

deep and very poetic, makes one ponder too. love it

[The Refined Poet]

well crafted and constructed... thanks for sharing with us...

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

:)

[kublakhan27]

Brilliant...no further comments necessary^^

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

cheers KK

[ms. barrie]

Once again, an amazing write, love the imagery, concept and flow.

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

My thanks :)

[Brandon S. Whitten]

In time. Splendid write.

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Thank you Brandon :)

[ScorpioSun]

I like the hint of occult, and the feel of some ritual that has led to enlightenment. It reads like the reverence of glimpsing God.

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Am glad you saw it as such.

[Redrascalstrawberry]

This is so beautiful.....each and every word of it was perfectly placed:) good!

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

My thanks to you Strawberry :)