Magnus Opus Hermeticus

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Magnus Opus Hermeticus

Crystal clear, the waters of life.
Shown to me by angels of grace.
I sing, to the mornings stars.
Lord, my soul cries for you.

Grounded on earth's foundations.
Focused on heavens divine light.
I enter through minds door.
 Immaterial vision awaits me.

A gift from the mercy of God.
I have been born in my mind!
Immortal, I stand before the mirror.
Deathless, till the end of time.

Now for a moment, I ascend.
Floating, through clouds of wisdom.
I bathe in a universal castile.
Cleansed of earthly immorality. 

No desecration within the all above.
No violation, in the celestial hallowed halls.
Here I gaze upon hope, imagination and love.
Framed, bound together in trinity.

Far then on winged feet, I travelled,
Not held by the circle of life.
Till time and space became nothingness.
I sped towards a singular light.

Where I am afforded a brief glimpse.
 A golden cup of pansophic truth.
Burning in enlightenment flame.
Blinded, I am sent back into minds eye.

I awake from the dream glad.
For in the heart of this man.
I have learned of greater mysteries.
For in searching for truth,my soul is stilled.

The eternal flame burns brightly.

Cum Luce Salutem.














 

 

Reviews

[Mia]

You're an incredible writer. Each time I read a new poem of yours, I am amazed at what your mind does with words. And it always seems effortless. Where to from here? The obvious answer seems down but I don't doubt that you will find a way to top this and again leave me in awe.

"For in searching for truth,my soul is stilled."

Seriously! What planet are you from!!!

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

I hope there is more of me to come form me as I only began writing two months ago when I joined here in fact. I have a lot of ideas in my head and my imagination has really grown since writing and my dreams and night have become quite amazing....am lucky in the fact I can remember most of my dreams. Thank you Mia for your very kind words.

[Mia]

You're clearly a natural...two months...that's amazing John! You are very welcome for my honest words.

[Larry Dyson]

send us link for the poem submission again please?

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

http://www.writerscafe.org/groups/The-Magical-Mythical-Mystery-Compendium/8970/

[lothlorienwriter]

JOHN! JOHN!! JOHN!!! What Metaphysical manna this is! I have never been on such a journey in my minds eye. So to travel on yours was a ethereal experience to say the least........I feel cleansed. Your poetry is a joy an inspiration.


Posted 11 Months Ago

[Phantom Heart]

What can I say, "very well done!" Thanks for sharing! I always like to read your poetry!
"Now for a moment, I ascend.
Floating, through clouds of wisdom.
I bathe in a universal castile.
Cleansed of earthly immorality."

[Abdul Batin Osman Bey]

this is a great write all the dots connected amazing.

[Sethnicity]

Interresting write has a very erie feel to it yet retaing a curious passage here and there to keep me as a reader search and reading on. Thank you for this request.

[Mary]

This mental, spiritual, soulful journey in meditation is so beautiful! A simple prayer- "Lord my soul cries for you" is answered so magnificently! Your poem allows the reader to share this journey. Just a quick note, in the third stanza from the end, you might consider keeping everything in the present tense, unless that's how you mean it to read.

[DrD]

Very impressive with excellent word selection and form. I would personally have preferred "awakened from a gladdened dream" to "awake from the dream glad" but that's just me. I truly enjoyed this work and send my kudos

[Katherine Enma Pineappl..]

I like what you have written very much. It seems so tangible yet also not. I'm amazed by how... different you write. In the most positive way I could imagine.

A lovely write you have here :)

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

I am very good at remembering my dreams and the great ones I tend to put in a poem such as this.

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

What a unique talent :D for me it only happens time to time :/

[Barbara Walker]

This is brilliant, awesome! Love your word choices and this flows beautifully.

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Thank you B I really enjoyed writing this one.

[Craba]

a very deep profound write, very nicely written as well

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Since I started writing.....something seems to have happened in the imaginative part of my brain as I have started to have these real deep dreams.....and they often get turned into a poem...such as this one . Thanks JR

[lothlorienwriter]

These dreams John.......every thought you may be a "Prophet".....you have the right name for it !! LOL :)

[Craba]

my dreams are all wicked. I see myself dead and standing over my body. Wondering if i should get back in my body. Don't know why i have these dreams. I have had other weird freaky ones as well. They scare me.

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Ah your having OBE's dont be afraid of them they can be great fun once you learn how to control them. Do you here a slight vibrating sounda kind of high pitched reverberating whistle before leaving body?? Should it get too freaky just start saying no no no calmly in your head and you will return.

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

here = hear :)

[Craba]

i don't remember if i do or not. I just want to wake up i don't like the dreams at all, they scare me enough.