Stone Circle Mystery

My new poem "Stone Circle Mystery". John Phoenix Hutchinson (C)2012 You are standing at the heart of an ancient mystical stone circle.

 Stone Circle Mystery.   


Time has no implication, no symbolization here.

Within the circle of the standing stones, you are immune.

 Body engaged, entwined with the earth, held captivated.

Standing more like a statue, than the stones themselves.

In this captured space the significance of spirit soars.

Mystical magnificence invigorates, motivates the soul.

You are singular in the universal metropolis and centre of the all.

The solar and lunar tides sweep over you, a torrent of emotion.

Lost in a flood of sensation, elated passion for life.

Overwhelmed by the vast domain of never ending space.

Your heart is renewed and you enter heavenly innocence.

Reviews

[Leigh]

Very nice descriptive and message, I like this very much, also nice image to go with it

[That_Girl]

Very well constructed. The poem is fresh; nothing else like it on here. Well done!

[PublishingAgent]

Told you this was a Premier League Poem. Its partly because people can imagine standing there.....and can feel the force of your words. Like I said have 'forwarded' this one.

[Ella]

Another amazing job, :) Love it

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Yes I liked this one Thank you.

[SmileBig :)]

Really beautifully written :) nice job!

[Kelsey]

This is beautiful. You always use such an amazing choice of words. Great piece, as always. Your writing is always amazing.

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

I woke up in poet mode this morning thank you.

[MOON]

Timeless , space and time non existent, like the picture and imagery your words evoke.

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Its a wonderful place Castlrigg

[gombeggar]

yer words boad well with the pic...but stand well enuff just by themselves...nice work

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

The words are about the pic.....been there many a time. Thanks

[Mia]

How do I get to this place?! This is magnificent...you've painted a picture with your words. A tranquil, beautiful picture and I just want to be in it.
"Time has no implication, no symbolization here.
Within the circle of the standing stones, you are immune."
“You heart is renewed and you return to innocence,”
This is magical!

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Well you can go there its a real stone circle . Castlerigg Keswick in the English Lake District.

[Mia]

Great I'll just pop by...LOL :) I live far far FAR away