Moving On.

Moving in on is hard after heartbreak but something we all must do after we realize they DONT love you any more.

Every moment.
Every day.
I think of you.
Gone away.

Every second.
Every hour.
I am held.
Still in your power.

You don't love me.
That is plain.
Every heart beat.
I feel the pain.

How can I?
Get over you.
Rebuild my life.
Start a new.

Moving on.
Is hard to start.
Pick up the pieces.
Of my broken heart.

You don't love me.
That is plain.
On with life.
Not the same.

Keep on smiling.
I must do.
Take the test.
Learn from you.

Try real hard.
Work my best.
Sing out loud.
Get you off my chest!

Reviews

[Alexandria Reece]

It's very real as if you bled it out onto the page (as dramatic as that sounds I mean it in the best of ways).. a piece of you. The feel is so lyrical that the second read through, as I tend to read the poems I review aloud, I attempted to sing it. It sounds pretty good in tune. Very nice work, sir.

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

It was is very real.

[Jolie Blossom]

I love this, and totally feel it as I read every line. Heartbreak is one of the most real things we endure, sometimes we get over it, sometimes we don't. I don't think I'll ever completely understand it.

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

aha....this is the comment that got you a top reviewers badge :)