Oh, Stop your Brother, Cupid!

A lovers poem, this is part of the "A Kid's view of Life" collection.

I saw Cupid' brother, Dipuc

Holding Cupid's bow,

But he uses it for himself,

Changing it's function.

 

Just then, he struck a person,

Who is really in love,

Right there, then he slapped her face!

And broke with her up! aw!

 

I then saw Cupid, looking for his bowm

I told everything to him,

He was surprised, flaming with anger!

And ran with rage within!

 

After that, Dipuc struck this dog,

Who really loves her puppies,

Suddenly, she left the pups,

Loving another puppy.

 

Cupid, oh Cupid, can you find Dipuc

And bring things back to normal?

Oh, I need your help Cupid,

The puppies will surely die.

Reviews

[Scene, not herd]

This poem has a fresh, creative idea behind it. Keep writing, you're bound to get better!

[black.butterfly]

this is confusing. '-'