Favourite Season

I get to walk on jig-saw puzzles
in my favourite season.

Always feet-ward my eyes
dart from piece to piece --
Dream carpets and puzzles turning
brown, pumpkin, cranberry, gold
coin collections rusted,
Chinese fans and willow tears
silverfish, almond husks,
chestnut leathers,
open palms tan,
Japanese lacquer paints,
cantaloupe crescents
pear skins and flesh
cedar slivers,
Miro designs,
crystallized citrus peels:
grapefruit, orange, lemon --

In my favourite season
the sun comes from the ground.

Reviews

[Moonie]

I love list poems, and this one is particularly amazing! In my library!:)
My favourite lines would be
"cedar slivers,
Miro designs,
crystallized citrus peels:
grapefruit, orange, lemon --"

[Blake Fodor]

Very beautifully done! The meanings expressed here are clearly understood.

[Mary Bosworth]

The way you write is so intriguing, amazing and beautiful.

[Matching Socks]

This is absolutely amazing, what a great imagination you gave to see it this way.

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of words. The description open the door to vision and beautiful place. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Patrick]

I love the honesty of this write my friend. Great job

[Botania]

Mysterious! Fun. Thank you John

[R Smith]

kinda makes me think "Hope springs eternal" the rise of spring and the new buds of youth and love with a very fruity feel to it, great poem John :)

[K Scott Smith]

Your words flow very smoothly and bring images to mind. Thank you for sharing this with us